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2/9/2004 c1 30Ruana
ooh cool, i really like the last stanza.
4/25/2002 c1 Bil
Beautiful.
4/12/2002 c1 whipper
I really do see him. (She takes my hand)

Don't you believe? (Her hands are cold)

I loved that part... it was really, really great!
1/23/2002 c1 142Battykat
strange. was the little girl an angel too? beautiful newho.
10/12/2001 c1 14Allana
Have I reviewed this before? I probably have... I love this poem. It's sad, but very very cool. Have you considered putting this in the lit. mag.? I think Mrs. Grammar would like it. :-)
8/26/2001 c1 7FyireChildesDream
so i'm guessing the little girl is a messenger from beyond the grave or there is something gone wrong with her...very touching poem. it has a sweet message, very simple, and is wonderfully written. not much to say...didn't stir up any conflicts
3/30/2001 c1 7The Lighter Side of Darkness
nice poem, a cute little story. is it true? :)

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