for Angels4/12/2002 c1 whipper
I really do see him. (She takes my hand)
Don't you believe? (Her hands are cold)
I loved that part... it was really, really great!
I really do see him. (She takes my hand)
Don't you believe? (Her hands are cold)
I loved that part... it was really, really great!
10/12/2001 c1 
14Allana
Have I reviewed this before? I probably have... I love this poem. It's sad, but very very cool. Have you considered putting this in the lit. mag.? I think Mrs. Grammar would like it. :-)
14AllanaHave I reviewed this before? I probably have... I love this poem. It's sad, but very very cool. Have you considered putting this in the lit. mag.? I think Mrs. Grammar would like it. :-)
8/26/2001 c1 7FyireChildesDream
so i'm guessing the little girl is a messenger from beyond the grave or there is something gone wrong with her...very touching poem. it has a sweet message, very simple, and is wonderfully written. not much to say...didn't stir up any conflicts
7FyireChildesDreamso i'm guessing the little girl is a messenger from beyond the grave or there is something gone wrong with her...very touching poem. it has a sweet message, very simple, and is wonderfully written. not much to say...didn't stir up any conflicts