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9/14/2007 c1 49Corelli
not bad. i like the repetition of stanzas; i often use that myself. it feels almost like a chant or song. keep writing. :)
9/8/2007 c1 1her name is
I really love this; I adore the style and how the word choice sets the mood so well.

The last few phrases were amazing, as was "thinking about those cracked hands sinew bones and worms leaves the ancient convulsing in anticipation".

Also, thank you so much for the review of my poem (eh, I guess it's more like free verse, actually, but whatever.) I don't know how I didn't see it before, but it means a lot, especially because what you've posted on here is so good.
8/30/2007 c1 44AuraBorealis
good owrk. why is death there?
8/30/2007 c1 3Jeanie Gordon
Spooky... I like it. :D The mercury bit is a cool idea.

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