for The Truth in Photographs8/13/2015 c1 lumutness
this is so... twisted. A nice piece of story, nonetheless. Interesting Point of View you write here. :)
this is so... twisted. A nice piece of story, nonetheless. Interesting Point of View you write here. :)
5/28/2008 c1 
3ThomasCMay
I really liked this story... reminds me of things I've said about photographs. With a little re-working I could see this working as a monlogue on stage or something. I'll admit I didn't quite see the twist of him being the child that took the photo... I thought perhaps a father or something. Well written though. Thank you for sharing. :)
3ThomasCMayI really liked this story... reminds me of things I've said about photographs. With a little re-working I could see this working as a monlogue on stage or something. I'll admit I didn't quite see the twist of him being the child that took the photo... I thought perhaps a father or something. Well written though. Thank you for sharing. :)
8/31/2007 c1 Invisible Photographer
Very fair reflection.
Very fair reflection.
8/31/2007 c1 8Nirnaeth Arnoediad
Wow, this is really nice. I like the little interlude lines to talk to people in the class, and you do a good job making a solid chunk of dialogue sound realistic. I don't have any actual writing suggestions, but you may want to close the quotes at the end of the piece. Also, engineering is more on the application side of the spectrum then the theoretical-maybe math or astrophysics? Other than that, great job!
8Nirnaeth ArnoediadWow, this is really nice. I like the little interlude lines to talk to people in the class, and you do a good job making a solid chunk of dialogue sound realistic. I don't have any actual writing suggestions, but you may want to close the quotes at the end of the piece. Also, engineering is more on the application side of the spectrum then the theoretical-maybe math or astrophysics? Other than that, great job!