
1/5/2011 c1
5kewltashigirl
I love the idea. The writing could be a bit more clear and polished (edit again or ask someone else to edit for you?), but it's still an awesome story. Keep writing, or else!
;D

I love the idea. The writing could be a bit more clear and polished (edit again or ask someone else to edit for you?), but it's still an awesome story. Keep writing, or else!
;D
9/21/2007 c1 Waffle Rocket
Aw. This is so sweet. I absolutely love it. Your one-shots are so cute, so sweet, so amazing. They really, really make a person think. And I WANNA DANCE IN THE RAIN TOO! It's raining right now. Lol.
Aw. This is so sweet. I absolutely love it. Your one-shots are so cute, so sweet, so amazing. They really, really make a person think. And I WANNA DANCE IN THE RAIN TOO! It's raining right now. Lol.
9/5/2007 c1
37O-o The Orange Moose o-O
Wow. This was really good. I simply loved this :3 So..sweet..and..awesome! Way to go; keep writing :3

Wow. This was really good. I simply loved this :3 So..sweet..and..awesome! Way to go; keep writing :3
9/2/2007 c1
3The Cruel Irony
Wow, that was brilliant! *adds it to The Reviews Lounge archive* It was well-written, had a great length and was fantastic! Great job on this, I adored it ^^
-Yazzi

Wow, that was brilliant! *adds it to The Reviews Lounge archive* It was well-written, had a great length and was fantastic! Great job on this, I adored it ^^
-Yazzi