7/26/2012 c26 Aweseeker
oh my god. this was fucking awesome. thank you for writing this perfect, awesome and glorious story.
oh my god. this was fucking awesome. thank you for writing this perfect, awesome and glorious story.
6/29/2012 c26 3Epical
O3O .. Well then. *laughs* I.. I finished and I swear, I had a fangirl bloody nose moment quite a few times. I didn't know what to do but squeeze my pillow to death and gawk at the story before me. So what does that mean to you? I really enjoyed it. The scenes between each couple was very well written and I felt like I could perfectly picture each scene in my head. That being said, I felt that some aspects of the story moved a little too fast but I got over it. Well done.
O3O .. Well then. *laughs* I.. I finished and I swear, I had a fangirl bloody nose moment quite a few times. I didn't know what to do but squeeze my pillow to death and gawk at the story before me. So what does that mean to you? I really enjoyed it. The scenes between each couple was very well written and I felt like I could perfectly picture each scene in my head. That being said, I felt that some aspects of the story moved a little too fast but I got over it. Well done.
3/16/2012 c26 Rapidez
Yay! Thanks for sharing the story! It's been nice!
I liked the middle parts of it the best; all those cliché scenes and awkward dialogues. It could have stayed T-rated to my tastes and some flashbacks didn't need to be so descriptive - but they were quite nicely done! Didn't disturb the story and provided more details. That was nice, and so were your plot. Your characters felt a bit to shallow to me, like they got labeled at the beginning and didn't progress anywhere, but it was a simple story for an entertainment and I think you've managed that just perfect! Thanks for writing and finishing it! .)
Yay! Thanks for sharing the story! It's been nice!
I liked the middle parts of it the best; all those cliché scenes and awkward dialogues. It could have stayed T-rated to my tastes and some flashbacks didn't need to be so descriptive - but they were quite nicely done! Didn't disturb the story and provided more details. That was nice, and so were your plot. Your characters felt a bit to shallow to me, like they got labeled at the beginning and didn't progress anywhere, but it was a simple story for an entertainment and I think you've managed that just perfect! Thanks for writing and finishing it! .)
3/16/2012 c7 Rapidez
Hahaha, this's been a hillarious chapter and a great way to keep my mind off RL stuff, so yay, thanks. xD
Hahaha, this's been a hillarious chapter and a great way to keep my mind off RL stuff, so yay, thanks. xD
3/16/2012 c1 Rapidez
Hahaha, looks like a funny, sweet and slightly cracky story, hope I'll like the rest as well! xD
Hahaha, looks like a funny, sweet and slightly cracky story, hope I'll like the rest as well! xD
1/25/2012 c1 4Hellaine
Hey.
I'll probably bookmark this because I dig this first chapter I've read and would like to look over the rest when I get a chance. I'm a sucker for band stories ;)
There's a tense error and a few commas that need to be inserted in. Boring stuff that can be easily edited and if someone else already said this, I apologize for being redundant but I didn't want to read the comments and spoil the story for myself. Anyway, I suppose it's really a beta readers place.
I had a little bit of issue recognizing who was saying what and differentiating each band person. I dig the mean manager though, I would have liked a little bit more info (and a little more bite perhaps) to her, but maybe there will be later.
I enjoy the banter though, and in a way it almost works that I'm unable to differentiate each character, it makes the argument a bit more comedic.
Good read :)
Hey.
I'll probably bookmark this because I dig this first chapter I've read and would like to look over the rest when I get a chance. I'm a sucker for band stories ;)
There's a tense error and a few commas that need to be inserted in. Boring stuff that can be easily edited and if someone else already said this, I apologize for being redundant but I didn't want to read the comments and spoil the story for myself. Anyway, I suppose it's really a beta readers place.
I had a little bit of issue recognizing who was saying what and differentiating each band person. I dig the mean manager though, I would have liked a little bit more info (and a little more bite perhaps) to her, but maybe there will be later.
I enjoy the banter though, and in a way it almost works that I'm unable to differentiate each character, it makes the argument a bit more comedic.
Good read :)
1/17/2012 c26 Agunimon17
Omg, I was so mad that you broke them up,but I forgive you because of how you got them back together. You should write more boy's love. It was a great story that had me, oh what's the phrase for a fictional story online? On the edge of my seat doesn't sound good enough. Really great story.
Omg, I was so mad that you broke them up,but I forgive you because of how you got them back together. You should write more boy's love. It was a great story that had me, oh what's the phrase for a fictional story online? On the edge of my seat doesn't sound good enough. Really great story.
1/16/2012 c1 mcspiffers
I finally got around to reading! :-D
well for the first chapter I rather like it, but I'm a sucker for band fics.
My only complaint was that I found the introduction of the characters was kind of confusing. I wasn't sure which character was the youngest or which was the pretty boy until the second or third read through.
I think the story has potential and will continue to read it :-)
I finally got around to reading! :-D
well for the first chapter I rather like it, but I'm a sucker for band fics.
My only complaint was that I found the introduction of the characters was kind of confusing. I wasn't sure which character was the youngest or which was the pretty boy until the second or third read through.
I think the story has potential and will continue to read it :-)
1/12/2012 c26 2bookaholic13
I just wanted to let you know that i really DID enjoy this story. I guess now i have to journey on, looking for new stories to keep me interested. Maybe you and I will meet again. Hopefully in similar circumstances. With similar results. :)
I just wanted to let you know that i really DID enjoy this story. I guess now i have to journey on, looking for new stories to keep me interested. Maybe you and I will meet again. Hopefully in similar circumstances. With similar results. :)