for Shimmering Light in a Shimmering Soul10/8/2007 c1 
20Twilight Starr
Good story.
You have to space in between paragraphs otherwise your text gets all grouped together. Then the reader can't read it.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrGood story.
You have to space in between paragraphs otherwise your text gets all grouped together. Then the reader can't read it.
~Twilight Starr~
10/4/2007 c1 1Gemma Lovell
THAT WAS AMAZING. Gah, you're a very good writer, but this could be the best thing you've written yet! There were a couple of grammaticla errors (four, if I remember correctly), but otherwise it was brilliant. I loved the end, too. You packed a lot of stuff into a small word count and it's...I can't think of a good enough adjective. You rock. More than before.
Love,
Gemma
1Gemma LovellTHAT WAS AMAZING. Gah, you're a very good writer, but this could be the best thing you've written yet! There were a couple of grammaticla errors (four, if I remember correctly), but otherwise it was brilliant. I loved the end, too. You packed a lot of stuff into a small word count and it's...I can't think of a good enough adjective. You rock. More than before.
Love,
Gemma