for Captured by Love9/22/2010 c4 yamum
that was the hottest thing ive ever read on fictionpress phowarh!
that was the hottest thing ive ever read on fictionpress phowarh!
9/10/2010 c6 
1FlowerGirl7
oh my god plez update soon! like now lol, i just came across ur story and saw u hadnt updated in a while, maybe this review will make u lol! its really good so far, i wanna know what happens next! :D
1FlowerGirl7oh my god plez update soon! like now lol, i just came across ur story and saw u hadnt updated in a while, maybe this review will make u lol! its really good so far, i wanna know what happens next! :D
1/21/2010 c6 Heather1234
so i found this story a while ago but i never got around to actually reading it but i jst did and i have to say this is really good.
if you could want to add any more soon?
that would be great!
i want to see who the guy is i have a feeling its leo or someone having to do with him,but i wont no for sure untill you update!
please:)
so i found this story a while ago but i never got around to actually reading it but i jst did and i have to say this is really good.
if you could want to add any more soon?
that would be great!
i want to see who the guy is i have a feeling its leo or someone having to do with him,but i wont no for sure untill you update!
please:)
1/9/2010 c6 18LittlEm
love...give me more please i beg of you.
fab writing, nice plot...
love
[LittlEm]
18LittlEmlove...give me more please i beg of you.
fab writing, nice plot...
love
[LittlEm]
11/19/2009 c4 LittlEm
FAB story Nat. truly intruiging characters and plotline. Well writte. ILOVEIT (:. Kim xx
FAB story Nat. truly intruiging characters and plotline. Well writte. ILOVEIT (:. Kim xx
6/17/2008 c4 7slash.obsessed.fangirl-42
O_O wow. that was intense. and now i can't wait for more... again! thanks for the update!
-kyra
7slash.obsessed.fangirl-42O_O wow. that was intense. and now i can't wait for more... again! thanks for the update!
-kyra
3/12/2008 c3 4rocknrosebubbles
haha lol. damn mothers are so annoying. please update soon i really want to know where this is going
4rocknrosebubbleshaha lol. damn mothers are so annoying. please update soon i really want to know where this is going
3/12/2008 c3 7slash.obsessed.fangirl-42
Wow, the ending was PERFECT! I loved it so much! You NEED to keep going with this! Fabulous story! I love the characters, and the story is light and fluffy with just enough of a serious twist to make it interesting. Great job!
-kyra
7slash.obsessed.fangirl-42Wow, the ending was PERFECT! I loved it so much! You NEED to keep going with this! Fabulous story! I love the characters, and the story is light and fluffy with just enough of a serious twist to make it interesting. Great job!
-kyra
3/12/2008 c2 slash.obsessed.fangirl-42
Another great chapter! I love the game they're playing with each other, and the way he's totally and completely under her spell is amazing! Great job!
-kyra
Another great chapter! I love the game they're playing with each other, and the way he's totally and completely under her spell is amazing! Great job!
-kyra
3/12/2008 c1 7slash.obsessed.fangirl-42
Oh, I like this! I've gotta go now (the bell just rang), but I will read the next chapter asap! great story, great characters, and i REALLY gotta go! lol
love it!
-kyra
7slash.obsessed.fangirl-42Oh, I like this! I've gotta go now (the bell just rang), but I will read the next chapter asap! great story, great characters, and i REALLY gotta go! lol
love it!
-kyra
10/11/2007 c2 39CynicalValentine98
Hey!
Okay, yes, I know I've read this all ready, BUT I'm at school and in my online class and quite frankly don't want to do Children's Lit. right now. Besides, your story is so much more interesting than that, lol... Anyways, I have to say I'm liking this edited version more than the first one. That isn't to say that the first wasn't good, because it was, this one just seems... Emm... more neat? It doesn't seem choppy at all, and the perspective changes more smoothly. I'm not sure if you know what I mean, but I know what I mean in my head, so, yeah... Great work... Anyways, I love this story. And the edited chapters are great. And I have to go now, school officals coming in and all... Keep writing!
Katie
39CynicalValentine98Hey!
Okay, yes, I know I've read this all ready, BUT I'm at school and in my online class and quite frankly don't want to do Children's Lit. right now. Besides, your story is so much more interesting than that, lol... Anyways, I have to say I'm liking this edited version more than the first one. That isn't to say that the first wasn't good, because it was, this one just seems... Emm... more neat? It doesn't seem choppy at all, and the perspective changes more smoothly. I'm not sure if you know what I mean, but I know what I mean in my head, so, yeah... Great work... Anyways, I love this story. And the edited chapters are great. And I have to go now, school officals coming in and all... Keep writing!
Katie
9/2/2007 c2 3SnowsxBitterxHeart
Hm, I wonder what he means by the One?
Well this is quite an interesting story I like it. Thought I feel the chapters are a bit short. Other than that its good.
I can't wait to see what happens next. ^_^ Good work.
*Snow
3SnowsxBitterxHeartHm, I wonder what he means by the One?
Well this is quite an interesting story I like it. Thought I feel the chapters are a bit short. Other than that its good.
I can't wait to see what happens next. ^_^ Good work.
*Snow