for Austin Kithara11/17/2007 c1 
73An Inside Joke
Seeing as so much happens over the course of this story, it would probably be better served if it were broken into chapters to give a reader time to process it all. I'd have liked if it could have opened with something more distinctive rather than just an introduction of all the charecters, but this seems well-thought-out.
73An Inside JokeSeeing as so much happens over the course of this story, it would probably be better served if it were broken into chapters to give a reader time to process it all. I'd have liked if it could have opened with something more distinctive rather than just an introduction of all the charecters, but this seems well-thought-out.