for Jonnie the Girl5/30/2019 c20 Guest
nearly four years since this was last updated, really wished to see the end of this story.
nearly four years since this was last updated, really wished to see the end of this story.
5/12/2017 c20 Tlotliso
Type your review tog plz continue
Type your review tog plz continue
8/1/2016 c20 varsha
Type your review z d whole story?
Type your review z d whole story?
5/4/2016 c20 Valia Exendra
Shit man, I remember buying this book way back in the dayShit man, I remember buying this book way back in the day. I can't help but hope you rewrote the ending :P
Shit man, I remember buying this book way back in the dayShit man, I remember buying this book way back in the day. I can't help but hope you rewrote the ending :P
1/11/2016 c20 
4Pandabearisnotabear
Hi there!
Just wanted to ask when are you updating again? I love the story and I really really want to know what happens with the characters :D
So, please update soon!
4PandabearisnotabearHi there!
Just wanted to ask when are you updating again? I love the story and I really really want to know what happens with the characters :D
So, please update soon!
11/22/2015 c20 Momochan77
This story is interesting. I'm glad Jonnie went for Ryder and hope they get back together and make up. Sean is a cutie and when you said he was Orochimaru from Naruto at the Halloween party, his cuteness went up for me. Danny, is ok. Definitely dramatic but in a charming way. Trent is a dog, and I can't wait to see what Jonnie has planned for him. Jonah is a sweet big brother type of guy. I hope he finds the right person for him as well. Ryder is sexy! I liked him almost instantly, and really hope he can work things out with his problems and Jonnie. Jonnie is a great character, she's spunky and sweet with a great sense of humor. I'm also curious to see what would happen if her brothers found out she was living with a bunch of guys. The only suggestion I would give you for your story is to give Vincent more chapter time. Dogs are adorable! Please update again soon :)
This story is interesting. I'm glad Jonnie went for Ryder and hope they get back together and make up. Sean is a cutie and when you said he was Orochimaru from Naruto at the Halloween party, his cuteness went up for me. Danny, is ok. Definitely dramatic but in a charming way. Trent is a dog, and I can't wait to see what Jonnie has planned for him. Jonah is a sweet big brother type of guy. I hope he finds the right person for him as well. Ryder is sexy! I liked him almost instantly, and really hope he can work things out with his problems and Jonnie. Jonnie is a great character, she's spunky and sweet with a great sense of humor. I'm also curious to see what would happen if her brothers found out she was living with a bunch of guys. The only suggestion I would give you for your story is to give Vincent more chapter time. Dogs are adorable! Please update again soon :)
11/16/2015 c19 listeninggame
Ah! What?! No! What is this?! This is going to kill me I swear, I love it so much.
Ah! What?! No! What is this?! This is going to kill me I swear, I love it so much.
11/14/2015 c19 3nlori1234
She's such an idiot! Omg. She finally finds a guy that really truly likes her and she just... ughh... she's a complete idiot. Must be that time of the month huh? :P She was totally over-reacting. She better apologise, and real quick at that.
~Nlori1234
3nlori1234She's such an idiot! Omg. She finally finds a guy that really truly likes her and she just... ughh... she's a complete idiot. Must be that time of the month huh? :P She was totally over-reacting. She better apologise, and real quick at that.
~Nlori1234
11/13/2015 c1 8RedRogue55
Hey, Lynn, I think you misunderstand. Definitely not an ad for money, but hopefully you get to check out the webshow on the totally free realm of Youtube!
Loves,
-RR
8RedRogue55Hey, Lynn, I think you misunderstand. Definitely not an ad for money, but hopefully you get to check out the webshow on the totally free realm of Youtube!
Loves,
-RR
11/12/2015 c1 Wendy Thompson135th
So this is all an ad for money?
Sorry, but not interested in anything this tacky.
So this is all an ad for money?
Sorry, but not interested in anything this tacky.
10/30/2015 c17 Guest
What happens next? Please finish the story
What happens next? Please finish the story
10/30/2015 c2 Guest
This is sooo good so far!
This is sooo good so far!