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9/3/2007 c2 crossed Ts
Oh, it sounds interesting. i love the dialougue. please update soon!
9/2/2007 c1 Kat
Ana, it's perfect! Honestly, I can completely hear you speaking every word of this...and not just because you're reading it to me right now.

(Side note: You suck...just because I'm anonymous =P)

(Second side note: You need to write every story you've just told me, as well as updating this one on a regular basis...please! *kitty eyes*)
9/2/2007 c1 Trishcbury
i'm so excited to read this!

i really like it so far.
9/2/2007 c1 1Fleeting Moment
HoHO, haha, UPDATE!
9/2/2007 c1 19ihrtbks
I love your style! You only tell the important things. Very intriguing prologue.

UPDATE SOON!
9/2/2007 c1 6MelGrl
I can't wait for the chaos and humor to commence. _ Please update soon!
9/2/2007 c1 akb-inactive
Wonderful beginning! It flowed nicely, and I relaly like the way you started it. It gives your main character a quirky voice, but all and all, this first chapter gave us a good feel of how our main character is. :D

Good job! Good luck with the story!
9/1/2007 c1 1Izella G
Ooh, I like it. Intriguing (especially the last parts). I like how you explained it all, without over doing it.

AND it's realistic. W0ot!

Update soon... please?

Isabella.x
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