for Jonnie the Girl9/2/2007 c1 Kat
Ana, it's perfect! Honestly, I can completely hear you speaking every word of this...and not just because you're reading it to me right now.
(Side note: You suck...just because I'm anonymous =P)
(Second side note: You need to write every story you've just told me, as well as updating this one on a regular basis...please! *kitty eyes*)
Ana, it's perfect! Honestly, I can completely hear you speaking every word of this...and not just because you're reading it to me right now.
(Side note: You suck...just because I'm anonymous =P)
(Second side note: You need to write every story you've just told me, as well as updating this one on a regular basis...please! *kitty eyes*)
9/2/2007 c1 
19ihrtbks
I love your style! You only tell the important things. Very intriguing prologue.
UPDATE SOON!
19ihrtbksI love your style! You only tell the important things. Very intriguing prologue.
UPDATE SOON!
9/2/2007 c1 akb-inactive
Wonderful beginning! It flowed nicely, and I relaly like the way you started it. It gives your main character a quirky voice, but all and all, this first chapter gave us a good feel of how our main character is. :D
Good job! Good luck with the story!
Wonderful beginning! It flowed nicely, and I relaly like the way you started it. It gives your main character a quirky voice, but all and all, this first chapter gave us a good feel of how our main character is. :D
Good job! Good luck with the story!