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for sucked into the whirlpool

11/24/2007 c1 2Angel Whispers Love
At first I didn't get. I was thinking, is she deing and seeing her life? then at the end I realized she is kind of trapped because she was miscarried. It was really good. I liked it
9/13/2007 c1 5Eagle Seance
It makes sense but sort of doesn't as well. I'm not sure if the story's from the perspective of a dead baby or an omniscient narrator (even though you use 'I'). I liked the term 'natural abortion'.

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