for Trouble Starts With a Q9/30/2008 c13 
5This.Texta.Is.Blue
didn't think it would actually happen!
but someone reads almost as much as i do.
almost. lol
yes yes the biography of Princess Diana is ridiculously good, read it like three times already i find something new every time i read it.
only one author i didnt like there and it was stienbeck i only liked the pearl from him and thats about it
but yes im loving the story
it's totally different to how i expected it to be
5This.Texta.Is.Bluedidn't think it would actually happen!
but someone reads almost as much as i do.
almost. lol
yes yes the biography of Princess Diana is ridiculously good, read it like three times already i find something new every time i read it.
only one author i didnt like there and it was stienbeck i only liked the pearl from him and thats about it
but yes im loving the story
it's totally different to how i expected it to be
9/26/2008 c23 smile at the sun
Wonderful story. I loved Devon and Quentin, and their relationship, the other characters, the plot, the funny dialogue, the first date... I really enjoyed reading it. Great writing. Please, please, please with a cherry on top write a sequel?
Wonderful story. I loved Devon and Quentin, and their relationship, the other characters, the plot, the funny dialogue, the first date... I really enjoyed reading it. Great writing. Please, please, please with a cherry on top write a sequel?
9/25/2008 c23 eh
i love your characterization of a korean girl. I am chinese, and I am exactly like that. My mom and dad is exactly like her parents too. It is soo funny, because it is so true. Though I would never date Q, he is too much trouble : )
i love your characterization of a korean girl. I am chinese, and I am exactly like that. My mom and dad is exactly like her parents too. It is soo funny, because it is so true. Though I would never date Q, he is too much trouble : )
9/23/2008 c1 theslykit
haha my mom is totally the same way! she hates eveything about japan but we have two japanese cars! :D
haha my mom is totally the same way! she hates eveything about japan but we have two japanese cars! :D
9/19/2008 c1 siluetamorfa
I have to said that you're one of the greatest writers I've ever seen in Fictionpress. Really. I love your stories, these one is my favorite. It's just that I love how you portray the characters and how they get to mature. For example, Quentin. I love these guy.
You're amazing. And thanks for the story.
I have to said that you're one of the greatest writers I've ever seen in Fictionpress. Really. I love your stories, these one is my favorite. It's just that I love how you portray the characters and how they get to mature. For example, Quentin. I love these guy.
You're amazing. And thanks for the story.
9/16/2008 c23 Charmainia
AH.
This is my favourite story, hands down, full stop.
GAH. I can't even find the words to say how much I love it.
I smiled throughout the entire treasure hunt sort of chapter, and the WalMart chapter...lksdjfasldfjszdf.
You are so awesome as an author. Or something.
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D.
Thank you for writing this! THANK YOU THANK YOU!
I think I'm going to have to make an account so that I can comment, but whatever.
I can't stop spazzing, I'm so giddy over the last chapter. =]
AH.
This is my favourite story, hands down, full stop.
GAH. I can't even find the words to say how much I love it.
I smiled throughout the entire treasure hunt sort of chapter, and the WalMart chapter...lksdjfasldfjszdf.
You are so awesome as an author. Or something.
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D.
Thank you for writing this! THANK YOU THANK YOU!
I think I'm going to have to make an account so that I can comment, but whatever.
I can't stop spazzing, I'm so giddy over the last chapter. =]
9/15/2008 c23 1Ana Prisca
Hi there... I've read RR and this story over the past two days and I just want to let you know that I've enjoyed it very much. =) I must admit, Quentin is such a likeable character despite his innuendos, but I guess that's what makes him so adorable. I'm glad he and Devon end up together in the end. They're such sweeties ;)
You've portrayed Devon's Asian (Korean) background so spot on! I'm an Asian myself and even though my parents aren't that strict (but they do complain that they work their bum off trying to provide for my little brother and I in a new country a lot =P), I have friends whose parents are just completely set on carrying out every tradition in their family/culture...
Anyway, I can't wait to read your other creations.
Love,
-Pree
1Ana PriscaHi there... I've read RR and this story over the past two days and I just want to let you know that I've enjoyed it very much. =) I must admit, Quentin is such a likeable character despite his innuendos, but I guess that's what makes him so adorable. I'm glad he and Devon end up together in the end. They're such sweeties ;)
You've portrayed Devon's Asian (Korean) background so spot on! I'm an Asian myself and even though my parents aren't that strict (but they do complain that they work their bum off trying to provide for my little brother and I in a new country a lot =P), I have friends whose parents are just completely set on carrying out every tradition in their family/culture...
Anyway, I can't wait to read your other creations.
Love,
-Pree
9/14/2008 c23 3Duuude
Wow. That was so cute and lovely and nice and beautiful and great and amazing and... ah. *sighs* I loved it!
It's so much more different than Alex and Adrian's story. I'm not sure which like more. But I loved the ending so much.
I agree that it doesn't need an epilogue, that would just ruin a perfectly written last chapter.
Wow. Quentin has outdone himself. The idea was soo orginal and cute. And I could go on forever about how nice it was. =)
I loved this story. And Devon. She's such a cool character. I loved that she was the studious nerd. But that she wasn't afraid to say what she thought or to scream in the middle of a cafeteria.
Her character was pretty amazing.
I think Quentin's character was much more amazing though. He's soo different and breath-takingly unique that I found myself wishing he was real.
I still do. =P
Anyway. Great job. I wish I had this much talent. I mean, you just pull your readers in with your interesting plot lines. Very talented, I'm jealous. T_T
But I loved this. Thanks! =)
... about another sequel, I'm not too sure how I feel about that either. I mean, it could get boring bringing them back all the time.
but it could be interesting as well.
one about meg could be nice. just not about the Alex, Adrian, Devon and Quentin generation. xD
3DuuudeWow. That was so cute and lovely and nice and beautiful and great and amazing and... ah. *sighs* I loved it!
It's so much more different than Alex and Adrian's story. I'm not sure which like more. But I loved the ending so much.
I agree that it doesn't need an epilogue, that would just ruin a perfectly written last chapter.
Wow. Quentin has outdone himself. The idea was soo orginal and cute. And I could go on forever about how nice it was. =)
I loved this story. And Devon. She's such a cool character. I loved that she was the studious nerd. But that she wasn't afraid to say what she thought or to scream in the middle of a cafeteria.
Her character was pretty amazing.
I think Quentin's character was much more amazing though. He's soo different and breath-takingly unique that I found myself wishing he was real.
I still do. =P
Anyway. Great job. I wish I had this much talent. I mean, you just pull your readers in with your interesting plot lines. Very talented, I'm jealous. T_T
But I loved this. Thanks! =)
... about another sequel, I'm not too sure how I feel about that either. I mean, it could get boring bringing them back all the time.
but it could be interesting as well.
one about meg could be nice. just not about the Alex, Adrian, Devon and Quentin generation. xD
9/13/2008 c5 Duuude
I know how Quentin feels. *sniffles*
I have the same problem. Can't concentrate, stay in one place, or not interrupt someone when they're talking... I'm really impatient.
But I'm not stupid. I can get A's. And I don't need an elaborate system to get away with my lazyness. I would sure love one though. I'm too lazy for my own good. T_T
Anyway. Quentin's awesome. He really is witty, he always has a reply stored somewhere in his brain. Haha.
Lovely so far. I'm sure I've read this before but I can't really remember it so I'm reading it again. (another symptom is short term memory loss. o_O)
=)
I know how Quentin feels. *sniffles*
I have the same problem. Can't concentrate, stay in one place, or not interrupt someone when they're talking... I'm really impatient.
But I'm not stupid. I can get A's. And I don't need an elaborate system to get away with my lazyness. I would sure love one though. I'm too lazy for my own good. T_T
Anyway. Quentin's awesome. He really is witty, he always has a reply stored somewhere in his brain. Haha.
Lovely so far. I'm sure I've read this before but I can't really remember it so I'm reading it again. (another symptom is short term memory loss. o_O)
=)
9/7/2008 c23 2wistfulpearl
this was really great to read! your writing never ceases to amaze me. keep up the good work!
2wistfulpearlthis was really great to read! your writing never ceases to amaze me. keep up the good work!
9/3/2008 c23 10x-Summer Rain-x
loved the story, so adorable. do you have the characters casted? cuz i saw a review reply where you said they were on your website, but darling there is no link in your profile.
10x-Summer Rain-xloved the story, so adorable. do you have the characters casted? cuz i saw a review reply where you said they were on your website, but darling there is no link in your profile.
8/31/2008 c23 LJANG
This story takes the cake. Quentin Alex. You made Adrian and Alex big asses in this story, haha. Who knew Q had it in him? My favorite scenes would have to be their first kiss in the gnome garden, Q professing his love to Devon in the cafe, and their first official date: the last chapter. I'm just really impressed. This beats out, R&R and the redux. There has to be a sequel! I'm totally up for more sequel/side stories if you plan on writing any. BRAVO~
This story takes the cake. Quentin Alex. You made Adrian and Alex big asses in this story, haha. Who knew Q had it in him? My favorite scenes would have to be their first kiss in the gnome garden, Q professing his love to Devon in the cafe, and their first official date: the last chapter. I'm just really impressed. This beats out, R&R and the redux. There has to be a sequel! I'm totally up for more sequel/side stories if you plan on writing any. BRAVO~
8/30/2008 c23 Anon
I just knew you had to be Asian, how else would you know so much about stuff, I mean it's so scarily accurate...the scary Asian mum, overachieving and shock horror when a B occurs.
I just knew you had to be Asian, how else would you know so much about stuff, I mean it's so scarily accurate...the scary Asian mum, overachieving and shock horror when a B occurs.
8/24/2008 c23 Crimson Cerise
wow, this story was great.
this was the first i reviewed one of your stories, even though i've been reading them for a long time. i even read all of your stories over at , under lj smith
i never read any of her books before but your stories over there were great. seriously, in my opinion, they were great enough to be published. :-)
anyway, im so sorry if i wasn't able to review them one by one.
Keep on writing!
wow, this story was great.
this was the first i reviewed one of your stories, even though i've been reading them for a long time. i even read all of your stories over at , under lj smith
i never read any of her books before but your stories over there were great. seriously, in my opinion, they were great enough to be published. :-)
anyway, im so sorry if i wasn't able to review them one by one.
Keep on writing!
8/19/2008 c23 1LifeIsAComedy
Ohh.Emm.Eff.Gee.
Holy Fucking shit. [Pardon my french]
But I LOVED it.
You really don't know how much I COMPLETELY FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!
I got yelled at a lot for being on the computer so long. [Reading this story!]
=]
But seriously, I just love River Valley.
You MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST[!] write more of the people from River Valley.
I have fallen in love with them!
=]
lmao, but you must!
I am going to start reading your other stories now.
But I will never lose hope that you do another story with River Valley.
=]
-Alicia
1LifeIsAComedyOhh.Emm.Eff.Gee.
Holy Fucking shit. [Pardon my french]
But I LOVED it.
You really don't know how much I COMPLETELY FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!
I got yelled at a lot for being on the computer so long. [Reading this story!]
=]
But seriously, I just love River Valley.
You MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST, MUST[!] write more of the people from River Valley.
I have fallen in love with them!
=]
lmao, but you must!
I am going to start reading your other stories now.
But I will never lose hope that you do another story with River Valley.
=]
-Alicia