for Trouble Starts With a Q7/26/2008 c23 xoxo
Homygoodness. I can not express my appreciation :0 way,way,way, awesome throughout the entire thing. Problem is, this is the first fictionpress story I've read (believe it or not) and now everything else is totally going to pale in comparison. The characters, the plot, the increasingly corny pick-up lines, everything was just great! Shouldn't this be, like, a book? :0 beyond awesome, bravo
Homygoodness. I can not express my appreciation :0 way,way,way, awesome throughout the entire thing. Problem is, this is the first fictionpress story I've read (believe it or not) and now everything else is totally going to pale in comparison. The characters, the plot, the increasingly corny pick-up lines, everything was just great! Shouldn't this be, like, a book? :0 beyond awesome, bravo
7/23/2008 c23 Monelisa
I'm officially in love with Quentin ... I loved this one so much more than the Alex and Adrian story ... ugh! I will be dreaming of this haha, I can relate so well to this. My boyfriend and I are high school sweethearts that came from VERY different groups lol Its working about more than 2 years so far so i love how this story sounds so much more promising =] Awesome, congrats to you and bless you for your talent! Please ... go make a movie out of this hahahaha
I'm officially in love with Quentin ... I loved this one so much more than the Alex and Adrian story ... ugh! I will be dreaming of this haha, I can relate so well to this. My boyfriend and I are high school sweethearts that came from VERY different groups lol Its working about more than 2 years so far so i love how this story sounds so much more promising =] Awesome, congrats to you and bless you for your talent! Please ... go make a movie out of this hahahaha
7/18/2008 c23 prisonerscinema
Another great story from an awesome author! Like someone said before me, I simply adored the nicknames that Quentin made up for Devon. As a character, he was really fun to read.
And gosh, if you do write a sequel about Grant and Nicky I just might die from excitement
Another great story from an awesome author! Like someone said before me, I simply adored the nicknames that Quentin made up for Devon. As a character, he was really fun to read.
And gosh, if you do write a sequel about Grant and Nicky I just might die from excitement
7/18/2008 c23 
10funsize
thi is the fourth time i've read this story.. ah...
you are definitely my favourite writer on fictionpress. i love every single one of your stories.. this ones my fave though
10funsizethi is the fourth time i've read this story.. ah...
you are definitely my favourite writer on fictionpress. i love every single one of your stories.. this ones my fave though
7/17/2008 c23 Revel in the Night
I don't think I have ever laughed so hard! LMAO =D Thanks for writing this hilarious and sappy story! You are a genius!
I don't think I have ever laughed so hard! LMAO =D Thanks for writing this hilarious and sappy story! You are a genius!
7/16/2008 c23 Ouija
Tons have probably asked this, but if there is another River Valley, who will be Grant's lead female interest?
Tons have probably asked this, but if there is another River Valley, who will be Grant's lead female interest?
7/13/2008 c23 5Ocean's pebble
I like it! The re-write really helped, it totally shows off more of Quentin and Devon's relationship. Tis awesome! I love the whole date. The only thing that I'm disappointed in is the fact that the scene where Quentin says something about taking off his shirt again and Devon tells him that he better not because her mother will hear and he backs down almost immediately and she says that he can't be frightened of her mother THAT mush and he says that yes, yes he is and it's funny.
Crap, that was a long sentence.
Anywho, keep writing, I loves your work!
XD
5Ocean's pebbleI like it! The re-write really helped, it totally shows off more of Quentin and Devon's relationship. Tis awesome! I love the whole date. The only thing that I'm disappointed in is the fact that the scene where Quentin says something about taking off his shirt again and Devon tells him that he better not because her mother will hear and he backs down almost immediately and she says that he can't be frightened of her mother THAT mush and he says that yes, yes he is and it's funny.
Crap, that was a long sentence.
Anywho, keep writing, I loves your work!
XD
7/11/2008 c23 Shiva
I love the nicknames Quentin creates for Devon. He's such a cutie and she's so lucky.
It would be VERY funny if you did a story about Meg and Isaac! When they get older, I mean. Think about the possibilities...;)
Well, if you write about Grant and Nicky it would be very cute too.
Hell, if you write anything I will be so happy. I love your writing, but I think it'll be very difficult to create another character better then Quentin. He's amazing^^
I love the nicknames Quentin creates for Devon. He's such a cutie and she's so lucky.
It would be VERY funny if you did a story about Meg and Isaac! When they get older, I mean. Think about the possibilities...;)
Well, if you write about Grant and Nicky it would be very cute too.
Hell, if you write anything I will be so happy. I love your writing, but I think it'll be very difficult to create another character better then Quentin. He's amazing^^
7/10/2008 c23 5God's worst mistake
I think I've read practically all the texts you had written on fictionpress, but I admit this one is most certainly the funniest of all (I think I can be trusted, it managed to make me laugh at 2 in the morning. Whole night, actually, 'cause I wouldn't stop reading until it ended ^^)
Quentin is just amazingly funny.
I really enjoy your writing style (not sure that's exactly the way you say it in english, but anyway...) and hope that there will be other wonderful texts to follow (already a sox in a bow fan !)
5God's worst mistakeI think I've read practically all the texts you had written on fictionpress, but I admit this one is most certainly the funniest of all (I think I can be trusted, it managed to make me laugh at 2 in the morning. Whole night, actually, 'cause I wouldn't stop reading until it ended ^^)
Quentin is just amazingly funny.
I really enjoy your writing style (not sure that's exactly the way you say it in english, but anyway...) and hope that there will be other wonderful texts to follow (already a sox in a bow fan !)
6/29/2008 c19 1Writing4Eternity
I'm glad you did an interracial story. You don't see too much of those nowadays. (:
1Writing4EternityI'm glad you did an interracial story. You don't see too much of those nowadays. (:
6/27/2008 c23 justen
I agree! After having read the revised ending, the original one seems a bit rushed. I'm glad you changed it. I enjoyed it very much - so, thank you! I think Quentin might even be my favourite character of yours. ^^
I do not intend to bug you about it, but I'd really like to hear more from the river valley group. So I'm all for the Grant/Nicky sequel. I hope you'll find the time and inspiration to write it eventually.
I agree! After having read the revised ending, the original one seems a bit rushed. I'm glad you changed it. I enjoyed it very much - so, thank you! I think Quentin might even be my favourite character of yours. ^^
I do not intend to bug you about it, but I'd really like to hear more from the river valley group. So I'm all for the Grant/Nicky sequel. I hope you'll find the time and inspiration to write it eventually.