for Trouble Starts With a Q6/3/2008 c23 faedora
Three words:
IT'S SO CUTE!
Three words:
IT'S SO CUTE!
6/3/2008 c23 Keigojin
Yey, I liked this ending much better than your previous one, The other felt rushed where as this one flowed. Q and Devon are so cute ^_^
I'd apy you to write that sequelk seriously! Grant needs someone to look after him... kinda... well someone to be close to at least and he and nicky get along, she talks he listens what a relatiosnhip LOL. GOD HAD TO REFORMAT LAPTOP, MY DESKTOP FEELS DECREPIT RIGHT NOW. THANKS FOR THE UPDATE IT WAS A PLEASURABLE READ.. AS USUAL. KUDOS
Yey, I liked this ending much better than your previous one, The other felt rushed where as this one flowed. Q and Devon are so cute ^_^
I'd apy you to write that sequelk seriously! Grant needs someone to look after him... kinda... well someone to be close to at least and he and nicky get along, she talks he listens what a relatiosnhip LOL. GOD HAD TO REFORMAT LAPTOP, MY DESKTOP FEELS DECREPIT RIGHT NOW. THANKS FOR THE UPDATE IT WAS A PLEASURABLE READ.. AS USUAL. KUDOS
6/3/2008 c23 Mushypork
AH
So good 8D
I wonder if I could ever do something like that for my friends xD
Thanks for writing such an awesome story ;_;
AH
So good 8D
I wonder if I could ever do something like that for my friends xD
Thanks for writing such an awesome story ;_;
6/3/2008 c23 Annie
Asian families galore! ^_^ Being asian rocks sometimes doesn't it? Other times, when the pressure's on you to succeed it sucks...
Asian families galore! ^_^ Being asian rocks sometimes doesn't it? Other times, when the pressure's on you to succeed it sucks...
6/3/2008 c23 Mera004
Ah! :D That was so sweet of Quentin! I do like this ending even better than the old one. It made me laugh, it made me smile, and it gave me some of those warm fuzzy feelings in my belly, haha...
I also like how not EVERYTHING was perfect and quite happily ever after (like Abdullah not showing up and her mom's continued disapproval). Those things would take a lot more time to resolve, but it would prolong the story way too much if you tried to resolve them in here. So I guess we'll just assume that things turn out better eventually and/or we could find out more in possible sequels. :)
I love Quentin. :D
Ah! :D That was so sweet of Quentin! I do like this ending even better than the old one. It made me laugh, it made me smile, and it gave me some of those warm fuzzy feelings in my belly, haha...
I also like how not EVERYTHING was perfect and quite happily ever after (like Abdullah not showing up and her mom's continued disapproval). Those things would take a lot more time to resolve, but it would prolong the story way too much if you tried to resolve them in here. So I guess we'll just assume that things turn out better eventually and/or we could find out more in possible sequels. :)
I love Quentin. :D
6/3/2008 c23 zoule
Wonderful! Amazing! Adorable! *insert 99 more over-the-top adjectives of your choice* I'm sad Abdullah didn't make an appearance, but oh well, stubborn people can be like that ;) I was grinning throughout this entire chapter. Thanks for a great pre-birthday gift :D
Wonderful! Amazing! Adorable! *insert 99 more over-the-top adjectives of your choice* I'm sad Abdullah didn't make an appearance, but oh well, stubborn people can be like that ;) I was grinning throughout this entire chapter. Thanks for a great pre-birthday gift :D
6/3/2008 c23 Sydney
LOVE.
NO REALLY. I USUALLY HATE TYPING IN CAPS BUT THIS ENDING IS DEFINITELY DESERVING.
Ohmygoodness, that has got to be the most imaginative date I've ever heard of, and the perfect ending for Quentin and Devon.
You definitely made the right decision to rework the ending, and this was just perfection.
Bravo on an amazing job well done (I want my own Quentin!).
LOVE.
NO REALLY. I USUALLY HATE TYPING IN CAPS BUT THIS ENDING IS DEFINITELY DESERVING.
Ohmygoodness, that has got to be the most imaginative date I've ever heard of, and the perfect ending for Quentin and Devon.
You definitely made the right decision to rework the ending, and this was just perfection.
Bravo on an amazing job well done (I want my own Quentin!).
6/3/2008 c23 
1Shake Hips Not Fists
That was an absolute PERFECT ending to such an unconventional story! I literally laughed out loud more than once and the date was just too creative! :D This is definitely one of my favorite stories so far. :) AWESOME JOB! :D
1Shake Hips Not FistsThat was an absolute PERFECT ending to such an unconventional story! I literally laughed out loud more than once and the date was just too creative! :D This is definitely one of my favorite stories so far. :) AWESOME JOB! :D
6/3/2008 c23 1Enaid
im so glad you rewrote the last chaps and yes i am much much happy w/ the length of this chap. i found this so cute and i love the fact that it was a chuck-e-cheese's. such a quentin type thing. as always your story captivated me and i cannot wait for another whether or not its a river valley one or not
until then
**enaid
1Enaidim so glad you rewrote the last chaps and yes i am much much happy w/ the length of this chap. i found this so cute and i love the fact that it was a chuck-e-cheese's. such a quentin type thing. as always your story captivated me and i cannot wait for another whether or not its a river valley one or not
until then
**enaid
6/3/2008 c23 VirginiaVortex
Aw! Quentin's brilliant! I'm sad that this is actually the end this time. :'[
By the way, I'm TOTALLY for a sequel. Majorly. Enthusiastically. You get the drift.
Aw! Quentin's brilliant! I'm sad that this is actually the end this time. :'[
By the way, I'm TOTALLY for a sequel. Majorly. Enthusiastically. You get the drift.
6/3/2008 c23 Kim Bell
The ending was great. :]]
I loved Vaughn's present to Devon. xDD
And I think I'll steal Quentin for myself.
The ending was great. :]]
I loved Vaughn's present to Devon. xDD
And I think I'll steal Quentin for myself.
6/3/2008 c23 3emotionless-stares
This is undoubtedly one of the best endings I've read lol. Quentin is such a nice boyfriend. Great ending.
3emotionless-staresThis is undoubtedly one of the best endings I've read lol. Quentin is such a nice boyfriend. Great ending.