for Trouble Starts With a Q9/3/2007 c1 hedwigisnotdead
Ooh, yay, fun!
I recognise a lot of the sentences, she has female friends, there are recognisable Asians in the midst of Quentin's harem (which could also be known as school, but whatever) and her korean name is unpronouncable in both english and korean. Which is er, the same, except for the accent. *blinks*
And Abdullah and Phillipa is
Ooh, yay, fun!
I recognise a lot of the sentences, she has female friends, there are recognisable Asians in the midst of Quentin's harem (which could also be known as school, but whatever) and her korean name is unpronouncable in both english and korean. Which is er, the same, except for the accent. *blinks*
And Abdullah and Phillipa is
9/3/2007 c1 agirlperson
No dating bet this time? Hm, looks like you've got other plans to entertain us and show us Q's lecherous ways. ;) Ironically enough, one day while waiting for the bus after school with all the asians (At the bus stop, for some odd reason we asians flock together and stay as a herd; security in numbers, that's what I think.), I met a boy. Named Quentin. Who I've started calling Q. No, he's not like your Quentin, a bit of a flirt but he's actually a bit of a marshmallow. Did I mention Taiwanese? Hehe.
Hm...For some reason, I think Devon isn't as uptight as Aubrey; she seems to let things go along a bit for, it's not that obvious but it's just the feel I get from her. Out of curiosity, would you be able to name the differences between Aubrey and Devon or is it that there aren't exactly many differences at all? That and what stereotypical Asian traits did you put into Devon and which ones did you delibrately leave out because they made you cringe? Wow, I'm asking a lot. ^^; Sorry if it seems a bit too forward of me.
That and would we see any of Issac in this story? I've always loved him in RR and Redux; mainly because he seemed to be rather interesting and oddly enough, I could see Devon talking over random school related things with him. Eh, I know, random question considering that he's not in highschool and this isn't about Alex. Oh well. I guess I'll just have to wait. Hope you update soon, thank you for the wonderful chapter and sorry for the large amount of questions. Bye bye!
No dating bet this time? Hm, looks like you've got other plans to entertain us and show us Q's lecherous ways. ;) Ironically enough, one day while waiting for the bus after school with all the asians (At the bus stop, for some odd reason we asians flock together and stay as a herd; security in numbers, that's what I think.), I met a boy. Named Quentin. Who I've started calling Q. No, he's not like your Quentin, a bit of a flirt but he's actually a bit of a marshmallow. Did I mention Taiwanese? Hehe.
Hm...For some reason, I think Devon isn't as uptight as Aubrey; she seems to let things go along a bit for, it's not that obvious but it's just the feel I get from her. Out of curiosity, would you be able to name the differences between Aubrey and Devon or is it that there aren't exactly many differences at all? That and what stereotypical Asian traits did you put into Devon and which ones did you delibrately leave out because they made you cringe? Wow, I'm asking a lot. ^^; Sorry if it seems a bit too forward of me.
That and would we see any of Issac in this story? I've always loved him in RR and Redux; mainly because he seemed to be rather interesting and oddly enough, I could see Devon talking over random school related things with him. Eh, I know, random question considering that he's not in highschool and this isn't about Alex. Oh well. I guess I'll just have to wait. Hope you update soon, thank you for the wonderful chapter and sorry for the large amount of questions. Bye bye!
9/3/2007 c1 
9Lily Llynn
I love the Deborah-Devon thing, but I still miss Aubrey. :D However, I do like this revised version - not sure if I like it more yet, but the characters do seem a bit deeper, currently. Please update soon. :D
9Lily LlynnI love the Deborah-Devon thing, but I still miss Aubrey. :D However, I do like this revised version - not sure if I like it more yet, but the characters do seem a bit deeper, currently. Please update soon. :D
9/3/2007 c1 5peachfruitsalad
excellent as always! ah... if only i had an ounce of the talent your little pinky contains... lol, looking forward to the next installment!
5peachfruitsaladexcellent as always! ah... if only i had an ounce of the talent your little pinky contains... lol, looking forward to the next installment!
9/3/2007 c1 6Najia
Awesome! :) I was looking forward to more from you :) I think I like the way this is going... I kinda was feeling sorry for Phillipa (b/c of the bet) in the other one :P
6NajiaAwesome! :) I was looking forward to more from you :) I think I like the way this is going... I kinda was feeling sorry for Phillipa (b/c of the bet) in the other one :P
9/3/2007 c1 1Lil Bazza
I'm so reviewing in hopes of being number 1.
That and I should tell you that I'm so excited about this story. I did like the old version - and I was like "She's starting it again?" Damn. Ah well, should be... interesting. I'm glad its long. Quentin is fun. Devon is awesome too. She makes me laugh. If it's as awesome as Redux then this story and I will get along just fine. :D
Anyway, I'll be reading (even if I don't review - I'm rather lazy actually). But I'll most likely update, cause you're writting deserves it, and recognition is the key, right. Plus, it's fun, rambling like this...
OH I'm so excited.
Jen.
1Lil BazzaI'm so reviewing in hopes of being number 1.
That and I should tell you that I'm so excited about this story. I did like the old version - and I was like "She's starting it again?" Damn. Ah well, should be... interesting. I'm glad its long. Quentin is fun. Devon is awesome too. She makes me laugh. If it's as awesome as Redux then this story and I will get along just fine. :D
Anyway, I'll be reading (even if I don't review - I'm rather lazy actually). But I'll most likely update, cause you're writting deserves it, and recognition is the key, right. Plus, it's fun, rambling like this...
OH I'm so excited.
Jen.
9/3/2007 c1 14October Rose
You're back! *cue ecstatic screaming* Yes anyway... It's nice to see that Devon seems more well, wordy. Her comebacks are awesome. And I'm in love with Quentin again.
14October RoseYou're back! *cue ecstatic screaming* Yes anyway... It's nice to see that Devon seems more well, wordy. Her comebacks are awesome. And I'm in love with Quentin again.
9/3/2007 c1 5KayLee Cee
I think I'm the first reviewer...WOOT! I get to be the first one to tell you how AWESOME this story is!
I read the first version, and it was brilliant, and now I've read this and...YOU'VE SURPASSED BRILLIANCE! ALERT THE MEDIA! STOP THE PRESSES! A STAR HAS BEEN BORN RIGHT UNDER OUR RATHER LARGE AND HAIRY NOSES!
*snickers*
So, now that I've finished my ranting...
I like it. Deborah-Devon, I should say (different nickname...I love it!) is really well developed, and she seems like a bit of a mother hen/sister to her two best friends (both of which I really like and would love to steal off you, if that's okay...must remember to build that 'Fiction to Life' machine...!) and the poor thing, gets stuck with Quentin! Oh the pain!
Quentin seems like an even bigger pain in the ass...Fabulous. Just great for me, because he's always seemed like an ass.
~ No offence if you really like him or anything... *watches as angry hordes grab up their pitchforks and torches*
Alex and Adrian seem a bit more...content, when they're speaking, more relaxed and happier. I'm glad for them. I like them.
GRANT'S BACK! ~ Enough said
And are you sure the photography teachers name is Mr. Ferreira and not Mr. Ferns? Because he sounds just like my old Religious Ed. teacher...*shudder*
~ Let me just say, never again.
So that's my rampage, and I hope that you update soon...Fantastic story, hearting it all the way, yada yada, blah blah...et cetera et cetera and all that jazz...
Loving and Leaving,
Take My Attitude
xox
5KayLee CeeI think I'm the first reviewer...WOOT! I get to be the first one to tell you how AWESOME this story is!
I read the first version, and it was brilliant, and now I've read this and...YOU'VE SURPASSED BRILLIANCE! ALERT THE MEDIA! STOP THE PRESSES! A STAR HAS BEEN BORN RIGHT UNDER OUR RATHER LARGE AND HAIRY NOSES!
*snickers*
So, now that I've finished my ranting...
I like it. Deborah-Devon, I should say (different nickname...I love it!) is really well developed, and she seems like a bit of a mother hen/sister to her two best friends (both of which I really like and would love to steal off you, if that's okay...must remember to build that 'Fiction to Life' machine...!) and the poor thing, gets stuck with Quentin! Oh the pain!
Quentin seems like an even bigger pain in the ass...Fabulous. Just great for me, because he's always seemed like an ass.
~ No offence if you really like him or anything... *watches as angry hordes grab up their pitchforks and torches*
Alex and Adrian seem a bit more...content, when they're speaking, more relaxed and happier. I'm glad for them. I like them.
GRANT'S BACK! ~ Enough said
And are you sure the photography teachers name is Mr. Ferreira and not Mr. Ferns? Because he sounds just like my old Religious Ed. teacher...*shudder*
~ Let me just say, never again.
So that's my rampage, and I hope that you update soon...Fantastic story, hearting it all the way, yada yada, blah blah...et cetera et cetera and all that jazz...
Loving and Leaving,
Take My Attitude
xox
9/3/2007 c1 28Erisah Mae
Different... I don't mind this actually. Kinda starts a little earlier than the previous version, setting the tone for all to follow.
Erisah
28Erisah MaeDifferent... I don't mind this actually. Kinda starts a little earlier than the previous version, setting the tone for all to follow.
Erisah
9/3/2007 c1 5alineofprose
You haven't seen any swooning until you've seen me swoon over Trouble Starts With a Q, honestly.
A little awkward at first because I failed to realise that you changed the name, but blatant idiocy on my behalf- I apolologise.
I do, however, adore the change of seen; it's hardly as cliché as it was with the bet, and that, my dear, is oddly refreshing and swashbucklingly awesome.
I have to return to my bitch of a Modern History project, so I shall see you at ze next update, yes?
(I am so french ar. This is why Jap students shouldn't be unleashed on the world- we're insane and know frightfully little Japanese.)
5alineofproseYou haven't seen any swooning until you've seen me swoon over Trouble Starts With a Q, honestly.
A little awkward at first because I failed to realise that you changed the name, but blatant idiocy on my behalf- I apolologise.
I do, however, adore the change of seen; it's hardly as cliché as it was with the bet, and that, my dear, is oddly refreshing and swashbucklingly awesome.
I have to return to my bitch of a Modern History project, so I shall see you at ze next update, yes?
(I am so french ar. This is why Jap students shouldn't be unleashed on the world- we're insane and know frightfully little Japanese.)
9/3/2007 c1 6Ashter
ACK! After all that waiting. I yelled so loud the person i was talking to hung up on me! hahah. I see some bits of the old version, but I'm glad that you took off the bet thing, I guess it's more unpredictable that way, leaving room for a lot more surprises. Oh the darkroom-what a place for blooming hormones hahaha. Quentin is so adorable, and I want to see what'll happen to Abdullah, he's amusing. Awaiting more! I'll make sure not to check my mail when I'm talking to someone next time.
asht
6AshterACK! After all that waiting. I yelled so loud the person i was talking to hung up on me! hahah. I see some bits of the old version, but I'm glad that you took off the bet thing, I guess it's more unpredictable that way, leaving room for a lot more surprises. Oh the darkroom-what a place for blooming hormones hahaha. Quentin is so adorable, and I want to see what'll happen to Abdullah, he's amusing. Awaiting more! I'll make sure not to check my mail when I'm talking to someone next time.
asht
9/3/2007 c1 1Erin Maureen
i am so excited for you next chapter! i loved reason and romance redux, and I can't wait to see what you'll do with this story, and see how the old characters are! update soon!
1Erin Maureeni am so excited for you next chapter! i loved reason and romance redux, and I can't wait to see what you'll do with this story, and see how the old characters are! update soon!
9/3/2007 c1 2muryoutaisuu
interesting revised version.
can you by any chance reveal what didn't work in the earlier version?
and please keep it alive, even if it's longer than Redux.
muryoutaisuu.
2muryoutaisuuinteresting revised version.
can you by any chance reveal what didn't work in the earlier version?
and please keep it alive, even if it's longer than Redux.
muryoutaisuu.