1/28/2009 c23 summershine
I really liked it. I read your Adrian/Alex story first, and while I liked that one too, I also kind of disliked Adrian and Alex. So b*y all of the time, and always hiding their feelings. I really like that Devon and Quentin were more open. Less perfect. It was nice.
I really liked it. I read your Adrian/Alex story first, and while I liked that one too, I also kind of disliked Adrian and Alex. So b*y all of the time, and always hiding their feelings. I really like that Devon and Quentin were more open. Less perfect. It was nice.
1/22/2009 c23 naufdude
AW...
that was such a sweet first date! i loved how you had then dress up and go to chuck e. cheese! duch a Quentin move :D he is by far my avorite in the RV series!
thank you for the amazing story!
AW...
that was such a sweet first date! i loved how you had then dress up and go to chuck e. cheese! duch a Quentin move :D he is by far my avorite in the RV series!
thank you for the amazing story!
1/20/2009 c23 xo.music.xo
Okay, so i loved this story...
i haven't read the alex/adrian yet, but i think i want to go back and read that one... maybe some things will make more sense, but anywho.
i liked this story.
it was great... =]
Okay, so i loved this story...
i haven't read the alex/adrian yet, but i think i want to go back and read that one... maybe some things will make more sense, but anywho.
i liked this story.
it was great... =]
1/17/2009 c23 Sel
This is so good.
The chapter was unique but so is Q so it works... wow I love this story.
This is so good.
The chapter was unique but so is Q so it works... wow I love this story.
1/17/2009 c22 Sel
I loved this!
Poor Q, her mom is scary, but I like how honest he was.
This was a really good chapter.
I loved this!
Poor Q, her mom is scary, but I like how honest he was.
This was a really good chapter.
1/16/2009 c23 1greyes
This is actually my favorite story of yours! I love the humor, the drama, the characters, and the romance. Quentin is at times a perverted ass, but makes up for it by also be loveable, talented, and funny. I'm guessing that the reason Devon seems to realistic is because you put yourself into her. You did mention that you are Korean? Which is another awesome point of this story. I have two good friends who are Korean, so I'm farmiliar with the language and culture.
I think at this point I've read this story three times now? And I've adored it every time. One of my favorite scenes is the big fight between Devon and Quentin at lunch. (I love drama!) Another is the final chapter, during their first date. I know it's totally unrealistic (I am a strange combination of romantic and realist.) I think it's just so...perfect and happy and heart-warming.
Anyways, keep writing these fantastic stories about River Valley!
This is actually my favorite story of yours! I love the humor, the drama, the characters, and the romance. Quentin is at times a perverted ass, but makes up for it by also be loveable, talented, and funny. I'm guessing that the reason Devon seems to realistic is because you put yourself into her. You did mention that you are Korean? Which is another awesome point of this story. I have two good friends who are Korean, so I'm farmiliar with the language and culture.
I think at this point I've read this story three times now? And I've adored it every time. One of my favorite scenes is the big fight between Devon and Quentin at lunch. (I love drama!) Another is the final chapter, during their first date. I know it's totally unrealistic (I am a strange combination of romantic and realist.) I think it's just so...perfect and happy and heart-warming.
Anyways, keep writing these fantastic stories about River Valley!
1/16/2009 c14 Sel
That was one of the best first kiss scenes I've ever read, and I've read many, many books and stories!
That's just so Quentin!
That was one of the best first kiss scenes I've ever read, and I've read many, many books and stories!
That's just so Quentin!
1/16/2009 c13 Sel
I love this!
It's so random and weird, but not to unrealistic.
I have a feeling that he gives all those toys to sick children in hospitals, because he mention cancer, I think.
This is the best chapter so far.
I love this!
It's so random and weird, but not to unrealistic.
I have a feeling that he gives all those toys to sick children in hospitals, because he mention cancer, I think.
This is the best chapter so far.
1/16/2009 c12 Sel
I love the dinosaurs
I always did like Q and thought there was something below the surface, even in Redux. So I like how little by little we see the real him.
I love the dinosaurs
I always did like Q and thought there was something below the surface, even in Redux. So I like how little by little we see the real him.
1/6/2009 c8 J.Szewczuk
This is by far my favorite story you have written so far. I haven't finished it yet, but I will very very soon. I love the characters, I love the plot, I love the writing. It is absolutely superb.
This is by far my favorite story you have written so far. I haven't finished it yet, but I will very very soon. I love the characters, I love the plot, I love the writing. It is absolutely superb.
1/3/2009 c2 cosmopolitan
i really just abhor Adrian, and i have to ask if that's odd? if most people like her?
idk why, but i find that, personally, there's something decidedly... oh idk, slimy about her, i suppose... i guess that's an apt depiction
so, yet again, is that odd?
i really just abhor Adrian, and i have to ask if that's odd? if most people like her?
idk why, but i find that, personally, there's something decidedly... oh idk, slimy about her, i suppose... i guess that's an apt depiction
so, yet again, is that odd?
1/2/2009 c23 Alennia Midnight
i absolutely loved this story. In fact I am a fan of most of them. I read this one first, but I would like to know should I read redux, or the original? I truely hope that you decide to write the story on Grant and Nicky, or just another River Valley story, or just as good, write another sequel to AAO and EHL
i absolutely loved this story. In fact I am a fan of most of them. I read this one first, but I would like to know should I read redux, or the original? I truely hope that you decide to write the story on Grant and Nicky, or just another River Valley story, or just as good, write another sequel to AAO and EHL
1/1/2009 c23 bittersweethero
What a wonderful ending!
First the Brazilian steakhouse and now this! Brava!
What a wonderful ending!
First the Brazilian steakhouse and now this! Brava!