for Trouble Starts With a Q1/1/2009 c20 bittersweethero
What an another beautiful chapter!
hell. what am i saying?
this entire story is beautiful
What an another beautiful chapter!
hell. what am i saying?
this entire story is beautiful
1/1/2009 c23 kyala
I've read most of ur stories
and i have to say that i liked this the most =)
(but i might change my mind after finish reading Still Waters..who knows XD)
i like it that it's not so complicated as the others
i got fully immersed in the story during the last few chapters
and it was like i could really fell and understand wat Devon felt and thought
jus wanna say u did a great job
and i really like ur writing
I'll be reading Still Waters next
LOL
I've read most of ur stories
and i have to say that i liked this the most =)
(but i might change my mind after finish reading Still Waters..who knows XD)
i like it that it's not so complicated as the others
i got fully immersed in the story during the last few chapters
and it was like i could really fell and understand wat Devon felt and thought
jus wanna say u did a great job
and i really like ur writing
I'll be reading Still Waters next
LOL
1/1/2009 c23 
1AlphaBeatKayGee
i absolutely love this story! a lot! I've spent the day reading it..well new years eve until now and it was amazing. The chapters each one after the other were so intriguing! I love the chemistry they have and the lines Q has are hilarious! Anyhow I'm eager to start reading the sequel now and soo this is where i end my review!=)
-kay gee
1AlphaBeatKayGeei absolutely love this story! a lot! I've spent the day reading it..well new years eve until now and it was amazing. The chapters each one after the other were so intriguing! I love the chemistry they have and the lines Q has are hilarious! Anyhow I'm eager to start reading the sequel now and soo this is where i end my review!=)
-kay gee
12/31/2008 c23 grassong
damn! you're so good! i love your stories, and the whole angry asian mother - SO TRUE! hahahah! your stories always make me laugh, and you're so creative! i could go on and on on how much i love your stories~~ ahh... but then my fingers would fall off.
this by far is my favorite story. :] thanks and keep up the great work!
** i was telling my friend about this story, and i told him that if your story was published, it'd be BIGGER & BETTER than twilight!:] of course, this is just my opinion.. lol :]
damn! you're so good! i love your stories, and the whole angry asian mother - SO TRUE! hahahah! your stories always make me laugh, and you're so creative! i could go on and on on how much i love your stories~~ ahh... but then my fingers would fall off.
this by far is my favorite story. :] thanks and keep up the great work!
** i was telling my friend about this story, and i told him that if your story was published, it'd be BIGGER & BETTER than twilight!:] of course, this is just my opinion.. lol :]
12/30/2008 c14 grassong
im so confused. you got all the asian[ahem, korean] stereotypes and inside jokes and etc all right. o.o are you korean?
im so confused. you got all the asian[ahem, korean] stereotypes and inside jokes and etc all right. o.o are you korean?
12/30/2008 c23 10Aurora Corona
I FORGOT TO REVIEWW!
Oops, I just realised.
Anyways, I read through the whole story in a go, with a few small breaks in between (minor details...) anyway, I wanted to express how much I absolutely ADORED Quentin (oops, nearly spelled his name like that freshman girl :P) That guy is cute, man! I love how he was protrayed as that 'carefree, nonchalant guy' who doesn't give a damn about his grades and just focuses on seducing high-school girls. But Devon, she managed to uncover so many things about him, ADHD, and all that jazz. It's like she got to understand him through the love-hate relationship between them (like at the beginning of the story.) It's amazing how you managed to make them fall in love in just a few weeks, but even more amazing how you made it totally believable! I enjoyed this story THOROUGHLY and am hoping you will create more characters just like Quentin :) The way his pretense broke and he started to finally show another side of himself, the more serious one, is absolutely AWESOME. It was a bit depressing when they seemed to almost hate each other when they argued in the cafeteria, but at the same time I loved it! Hm, maybe I'm a sadistic reader, I dunno. But the fallout made me hold my breath in anticipation.
I can't really seem to offer any constructive criticism (sadly, I'm not that pro) but THIS. WAS. AMAZING.
Just had to get that out, lol.
Love,
curse the stars.
10Aurora CoronaI FORGOT TO REVIEWW!
Oops, I just realised.
Anyways, I read through the whole story in a go, with a few small breaks in between (minor details...) anyway, I wanted to express how much I absolutely ADORED Quentin (oops, nearly spelled his name like that freshman girl :P) That guy is cute, man! I love how he was protrayed as that 'carefree, nonchalant guy' who doesn't give a damn about his grades and just focuses on seducing high-school girls. But Devon, she managed to uncover so many things about him, ADHD, and all that jazz. It's like she got to understand him through the love-hate relationship between them (like at the beginning of the story.) It's amazing how you managed to make them fall in love in just a few weeks, but even more amazing how you made it totally believable! I enjoyed this story THOROUGHLY and am hoping you will create more characters just like Quentin :) The way his pretense broke and he started to finally show another side of himself, the more serious one, is absolutely AWESOME. It was a bit depressing when they seemed to almost hate each other when they argued in the cafeteria, but at the same time I loved it! Hm, maybe I'm a sadistic reader, I dunno. But the fallout made me hold my breath in anticipation.
I can't really seem to offer any constructive criticism (sadly, I'm not that pro) but THIS. WAS. AMAZING.
Just had to get that out, lol.
Love,
curse the stars.
12/30/2008 c23 kajeopr
ahaahahahahahahahahah
(at
the
moment
my
keyboard
is
busted
so
the
space
button
doesn't
work;(
as
such,
i've
got
to
resort
to
this
...
at
the
very
least,
my
review
will
be
original;)
)
the
korean
nationality
thing
makes
me
laugh.
i'm
chinese
myself,
but
while
reading
about
her
mom,
i
was
laughing
so
hard...
cuz
my
mom
is
every
inch
like
devon's
mom:D
in
any
case
Quentin
might
just
be
my
god
i
loved
this
story
so
much
and
i
loved
the
way
you
gave
so
much
character
to
the
story...
the
realism
you
have
in
your
stories
always
makes
me
...
just...
i
admire
it
so
much
i
hope
you'll
keep
writing
and
never
stop
:)
ahaahahahahahahahahah
(at
the
moment
my
keyboard
is
busted
so
the
space
button
doesn't
work;(
as
such,
i've
got
to
resort
to
this
...
at
the
very
least,
my
review
will
be
original;)
)
the
korean
nationality
thing
makes
me
laugh.
i'm
chinese
myself,
but
while
reading
about
her
mom,
i
was
laughing
so
hard...
cuz
my
mom
is
every
inch
like
devon's
mom:D
in
any
case
Quentin
might
just
be
my
god
i
loved
this
story
so
much
and
i
loved
the
way
you
gave
so
much
character
to
the
story...
the
realism
you
have
in
your
stories
always
makes
me
...
just...
i
admire
it
so
much
i
hope
you'll
keep
writing
and
never
stop
:)
12/30/2008 c19 Anonymous
This story is wonderful. The perfect amount of romance, flirting and tears. Both main characters are very strong-willed, and that's exactly what I love (:
This Quentin is obviously a sensitive jerk, who messes around with his amoebas, but at the same time when he falls for a girl, he obsesses. With this, how can you not love him? I do, really I do.
So far, I think you're one of the best authors in fictionpress. Maybe, even the best. Unique plots and mind-blowing retorts, mamma mia. Looking forward to your future works!
This story is wonderful. The perfect amount of romance, flirting and tears. Both main characters are very strong-willed, and that's exactly what I love (:
This Quentin is obviously a sensitive jerk, who messes around with his amoebas, but at the same time when he falls for a girl, he obsesses. With this, how can you not love him? I do, really I do.
So far, I think you're one of the best authors in fictionpress. Maybe, even the best. Unique plots and mind-blowing retorts, mamma mia. Looking forward to your future works!
12/28/2008 c23 l'heautontimoroumenos
I LOVE your story. Really, I do. As we say in France, je l'aime du fond de mon coeur défectueux.
And you have to write a sequel about meg. You have no choice. Otherwise, the weird french girl living in Bangkok (aka me) will come and rip your throat open and sing La Marseillaise over your dead body - or maybe some strange deutsch song about sinterklaas.
So beware, I'll be watching.
I LOVE your story. Really, I do. As we say in France, je l'aime du fond de mon coeur défectueux.
And you have to write a sequel about meg. You have no choice. Otherwise, the weird french girl living in Bangkok (aka me) will come and rip your throat open and sing La Marseillaise over your dead body - or maybe some strange deutsch song about sinterklaas.
So beware, I'll be watching.
12/28/2008 c5 Hey
Yep, it's true that ADHD becomes more manageable when you get older. My brother has ADHD and he was a terror when he was little, but now he's such a ladies' man. God, I swear, I'm taking a leaf out of Adrian's book and investing in some damn good earplugs.
Keep writin'!
Yep, it's true that ADHD becomes more manageable when you get older. My brother has ADHD and he was a terror when he was little, but now he's such a ladies' man. God, I swear, I'm taking a leaf out of Adrian's book and investing in some damn good earplugs.
Keep writin'!
12/28/2008 c23 5Not Mary Jane
Aw. This story is so sweet.
I envy Devon. Seriously, Quentin is so cute.
I have to admit, this story is even sweeter than R... but they can't compare in this way right?
Devon's mom is harsh, not all Korean parents are like this right? I know my mom's not, she's a Chinese.
Anyway, I'm so going to read Still Waters now. OMG. I LOVE THIS SERIES. Your writing is like the collab of Sophie Kinsella and Stephenie Meyer, with all those sweet characters and plots.
5Not Mary JaneAw. This story is so sweet.
I envy Devon. Seriously, Quentin is so cute.
I have to admit, this story is even sweeter than R... but they can't compare in this way right?
Devon's mom is harsh, not all Korean parents are like this right? I know my mom's not, she's a Chinese.
Anyway, I'm so going to read Still Waters now. OMG. I LOVE THIS SERIES. Your writing is like the collab of Sophie Kinsella and Stephenie Meyer, with all those sweet characters and plots.
12/24/2008 c23 2Hecate's Diamon
Great story! Actually, all your stories are amazing and I really think you should look into getting some of them published! Anyways... I'm off to read the next story, or maybe go to sleep, who knows?
2Hecate's DiamonGreat story! Actually, all your stories are amazing and I really think you should look into getting some of them published! Anyways... I'm off to read the next story, or maybe go to sleep, who knows?
12/24/2008 c23 3readITandweep
As a constant fan of all your stories this one does not fail the trend. You really have an amazing skill when it comes to developing characters and the stories overall. I of course loved this one, this series gets me everytime. Although i think reason and romance still might be my favorite, this is a really great story, love Quentin and Devon, and as an asian love the kind of banter with that. Good job :]
3readITandweepAs a constant fan of all your stories this one does not fail the trend. You really have an amazing skill when it comes to developing characters and the stories overall. I of course loved this one, this series gets me everytime. Although i think reason and romance still might be my favorite, this is a really great story, love Quentin and Devon, and as an asian love the kind of banter with that. Good job :]