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9/3/2007 c1 2Ephraim Sol
A good start, and very few errors, if only one. I can't really find anything wrong with it besides its shortness. But, then again to each their own.

Well written, good diction... not much else that is bad (which is a good thing,) but the unoriginality of the antagonist (though sarcastically admitted) still annoys me.

Nevertheless, interesting and be sure to continue.

I'll be sure to return,

Nimit

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