for A History Teacher9/9/2007 c1 
871no.peace.los.angeles
I can't say I fully understand this, but it's fascinating and beautiful all the same. Really some wonderful imagery in this, and yes, it's just wonderful. Keep writing! :)
871no.peace.los.angelesI can't say I fully understand this, but it's fascinating and beautiful all the same. Really some wonderful imagery in this, and yes, it's just wonderful. Keep writing! :)
9/4/2007 c1 54kaylajac
the last two lines, especially, have this galloping rhythm with that perfectly unforced rhyme, and god. this is amazing. tantalizing images, precise diction. i love it. :]
54kaylajacthe last two lines, especially, have this galloping rhythm with that perfectly unforced rhyme, and god. this is amazing. tantalizing images, precise diction. i love it. :]
9/4/2007 c1 the naked civil servant
oh, kahlo-esque...
your poetry is gallivanting along at an incredible pace... this is very... hm, how to describe? ... researched, structured. this frightens me :P. no, but it's gorgeous, really. i shall return when i am not reading the French Revolution into everything i see :P
love you muchly
xx
oh, kahlo-esque...
your poetry is gallivanting along at an incredible pace... this is very... hm, how to describe? ... researched, structured. this frightens me :P. no, but it's gorgeous, really. i shall return when i am not reading the French Revolution into everything i see :P
love you muchly
xx
9/4/2007 c1 79Summerdazed
this is definitely creative, and a joy to read though i might not really understand it. ^_^
=summerdazed=
79Summerdazedthis is definitely creative, and a joy to read though i might not really understand it. ^_^
=summerdazed=
9/4/2007 c1 21the blood society
this is absolutely /amazing/. i love the powerful imagery and the way you toss names and identities about. i particularly like the last two lines. lovely.
21the blood societythis is absolutely /amazing/. i love the powerful imagery and the way you toss names and identities about. i particularly like the last two lines. lovely.