for Heart Lilies11/23/2010 c4 Varinia
Young love! I am stoked for Plum. I want to know more about her past! It is killing me!
Young love! I am stoked for Plum. I want to know more about her past! It is killing me!
11/23/2010 c3 Varinia
Short and sweet. A mini-climax is building. I hope the next chapter is going to be full of action! Good job!
Short and sweet. A mini-climax is building. I hope the next chapter is going to be full of action! Good job!
11/23/2010 c2 Varinia
I like James. He is very down to earth for a Noble. I want to know more on Plum though... I think I'll keep reading.
I like James. He is very down to earth for a Noble. I want to know more on Plum though... I think I'll keep reading.
11/23/2010 c1 Varinia
Good for a beginning. My attention hasn't fully gotten caught yet but this was good enough for me to read another Chapter.
Good for a beginning. My attention hasn't fully gotten caught yet but this was good enough for me to read another Chapter.
11/11/2010 c22 wilhelmiina2
Sweet story, I liked the ending swell though you said it was lame. I was a little surprised that the Hurstons weren't more in awe of her gift, for a while I wonder if they even knew..
Sweet story, I liked the ending swell though you said it was lame. I was a little surprised that the Hurstons weren't more in awe of her gift, for a while I wonder if they even knew..
4/13/2010 c1 MelodieCC
i remember the last time i read this story... i really like it. i felt bad for not leaving much if any reviews, so here i am! :)
i remember the last time i read this story... i really like it. i felt bad for not leaving much if any reviews, so here i am! :)
1/3/2010 c22 
2Aelinn
Great story! I really enjoyed it, Plum and James are hilarious when they start arguing. Just one point, though - you might benefit from a proof-reader. There were quite a few easily correctible mistakes in there. But otherwise, very good, and I look forward to reading some of your other stories.
2AelinnGreat story! I really enjoyed it, Plum and James are hilarious when they start arguing. Just one point, though - you might benefit from a proof-reader. There were quite a few easily correctible mistakes in there. But otherwise, very good, and I look forward to reading some of your other stories.
6/25/2008 c22 2Gabbylynn
This was very well written. I enjoyed very much. I am a picky reader so when I take the time to read something that means something.
2GabbylynnThis was very well written. I enjoyed very much. I am a picky reader so when I take the time to read something that means something.
5/31/2008 c22 4MyFriendIsADork
I really liked this story and I thought that the ending was good so you shouldn't change it and the title's good too, it's much better than mine anyway
:)
4MyFriendIsADorkI really liked this story and I thought that the ending was good so you shouldn't change it and the title's good too, it's much better than mine anyway
:)
5/23/2008 c1 1sugarchic33
Tottaly cool story! it was so good i was hooked and couldnt stop reading until i finishe.
1sugarchic33Tottaly cool story! it was so good i was hooked and couldnt stop reading until i finishe.