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11/7/2007 c23 8Alice Heist
I never ignored you! XD

Anyhow, nice chapter. Very cheesy, and cheesy is good.

Gah, I'm so behind on my novel. So far, I have 12,181 words, and I'm going away for the entirety of the weekend.

This is one of those, "Well, shit." moments.

Anyhow, how are you? Rad/ nautical, I presume?

alice.heist.
11/7/2007 c23 12The Mac Scribble
OK! OK! I'LL REVIEW. God.

I like the story, you're extremely rad, and Kaitlin has my last name. THERE.
11/4/2007 c22 1d666lisa
I'D FORGOTTEN ABOUT THE LETTER LOL. EXCELLENT CHAPTER. SHE ISN'T REALLY GOING TO LEAVE HIM IS SHE? IT'S GOING TO BE SOO SAD IF SHE DOES :-( PLEASE UPDATE SOON
11/3/2007 c22 8Alice Heist
Alright, we can agree on disagreeing.

Anyhow, yes, I am NaNoWriMo-ing, and it's driving me crazy. So many words...
11/2/2007 c21 1d666lisa
AMAZING CHAPTER. I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ENDED IT LIKE THAT THOUGH LOL. PLEASE UPDATE SOON
11/1/2007 c21 anon
i am waiting for your next update

:)
10/31/2007 c21 8Alice Heist
I want you to go yay! So, uh, go yay?

XD

Anyhow, naut trumps all. Sorry.

Oh, and how was your Halloween? Are you NaNoWriMo-ing?

alice.heist.
10/27/2007 c20 none
keep writing.
10/27/2007 c20 Alice Heist
Haha, you need another wink there to be rad / naut. XD

Anyhow, they're adorable, but the line about her eyes darting up in their sockets? Yeah, I wasn't so keen on that one.

But, keep writing, rad friend. Have him com with her without her knowing until the very end. Cause that'd be adorable!

alice.heist.
10/23/2007 c19 6givelifeyurall
yeah i've been lazy. i was kinda losing interest in this story up until this chapter. can't jet move to new york with her?
10/23/2007 c19 8Alice Heist
No. Only naut kids do. XD

Anyhow, I review. So, there. Nice chapter. I hope he sneaks into her house and they have crazy sex, and then he tells her he's going to NYU to.

Yay!

alice.heist.
10/20/2007 c18 Alice Heist
You're right. It is the seventies, that's all tehy were doing then.

That's why they call them the "Baby Boomers..." XD

Anyhow, yay for issues! I like how the parents are like, "We were the punks of our time, and we turned out just fine. But, you? You're going the wrong direction, hun."

Nautical is the love child of Radical and the Sea.

alice.heist.
10/17/2007 c17 Alice Heist
Yay for shoving sex in our face! I was waiting for that. XD

Good chapter. It was nautical. I'm worried and curious about the whole dad thing happening. I'm excited.

Nautical trumps radical anyday.
10/14/2007 c16 Alice Heist
That was ridiculous! Redonculous! Redunculous, even. XD

I haven't had time to test run the music yet, but we shall see.

alice.heist.

keep it nautical. [it'll catch on.]
10/13/2007 c15 1d666lisa
Brilliant chapter, there's something about Brad that I really don't like but I don't know what lol :-)
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