
9/24/2007 c10
6givelifeyurall
hmm nope never heard of Donna Summer, only Donna Lewis. yeah your right, these people are just lazy! i'm happy about how kaitlin's life is changing

hmm nope never heard of Donna Summer, only Donna Lewis. yeah your right, these people are just lazy! i'm happy about how kaitlin's life is changing
9/24/2007 c10
8Alice Heist
Wow, you're the raddest kid on the planet. There's no way a person could get as rad as you are. XD
But, seriously, you are pretty rad just for saying rad.
Though, I've taken rad out of my vocabulary, and exchanged it for nautical. So, redo.
Wow, you're the most nautical kid on the plant. There's no way a person could get as nautical as you are.
I love it, and I'm glad you're a diligent updater. XD
love always, alice.heist.

Wow, you're the raddest kid on the planet. There's no way a person could get as rad as you are. XD
But, seriously, you are pretty rad just for saying rad.
Though, I've taken rad out of my vocabulary, and exchanged it for nautical. So, redo.
Wow, you're the most nautical kid on the plant. There's no way a person could get as nautical as you are.
I love it, and I'm glad you're a diligent updater. XD
love always, alice.heist.
9/23/2007 c9 Alice Heist
Well, it's nice to know that I'm not creepy.
But, most of the time I alert a story, I don't review it. It's just because I like the writing, and I want more stuff to follow, and I'm just way too lazy to actually say something back to someone.
So, aren't you lucky?
alice.heist.
Well, it's nice to know that I'm not creepy.
But, most of the time I alert a story, I don't review it. It's just because I like the writing, and I want more stuff to follow, and I'm just way too lazy to actually say something back to someone.
So, aren't you lucky?
alice.heist.
9/22/2007 c8
6givelifeyurall
sorry for not reviewing this one well it was very good though and you are very rad! lol

sorry for not reviewing this one well it was very good though and you are very rad! lol
9/22/2007 c9 givelifeyurall
she made the right choice, even thought it was done very badly...couldn't of been worse, he didn't get like one of those angry posessive almost about to hit you types. but...if she was leaving then how would it work with jet? and don't get to freaked out by those who don't leave reviews, maybe they have good reason like their in a hurry or sick or just have nothing to say.
she made the right choice, even thought it was done very badly...couldn't of been worse, he didn't get like one of those angry posessive almost about to hit you types. but...if she was leaving then how would it work with jet? and don't get to freaked out by those who don't leave reviews, maybe they have good reason like their in a hurry or sick or just have nothing to say.
9/18/2007 c7 givelifeyurall
i love it, first of all cuz its includes great bands, i never heard of the germs but i'll look them up. hmm when i first read 1979 i thought about the smashing pumpkins song. anyways good flow and mood to the story, its very calming and she seems like a very geniune person.
i love it, first of all cuz its includes great bands, i never heard of the germs but i'll look them up. hmm when i first read 1979 i thought about the smashing pumpkins song. anyways good flow and mood to the story, its very calming and she seems like a very geniune person.
9/18/2007 c7
1tihfunee
Oh, I think I love you. Haha.
You're one of the very few writers that actually tries to be acurate. :]
And, I think I've learned a bit in your afternotes hah.
Keep going, I feel an addiction forming.

Oh, I think I love you. Haha.
You're one of the very few writers that actually tries to be acurate. :]
And, I think I've learned a bit in your afternotes hah.
Keep going, I feel an addiction forming.
9/18/2007 c7
8Alice Heist
haha, yeah! I'm so cool.
anyhow, keep smiling, because I'm here again to tell you how rad you are. XD
I really like the accuracy, so some of us do care. but, otherwise, I love it. keep writing.
alice.heist.

haha, yeah! I'm so cool.
anyhow, keep smiling, because I'm here again to tell you how rad you are. XD
I really like the accuracy, so some of us do care. but, otherwise, I love it. keep writing.
alice.heist.
9/16/2007 c6 Alice Heist
Smile!
Well, I'm just saying that this is a really good story, and I'm enjoying it. Can't wait to read more.
I also really like that it's annotated, so keep doing that, I guess.
And, uh, smile, because that's what reviews are for.
alice.heist.
Smile!
Well, I'm just saying that this is a really good story, and I'm enjoying it. Can't wait to read more.
I also really like that it's annotated, so keep doing that, I guess.
And, uh, smile, because that's what reviews are for.
alice.heist.
9/13/2007 c5 Midnight Owl
really great; wish i could say more, but i have a european history paper to write. jet is by far one of the msot unique characters on fictionpress. :)
really great; wish i could say more, but i have a european history paper to write. jet is by far one of the msot unique characters on fictionpress. :)
9/7/2007 c3 JT FAN
a lil short.but it was a good chap.cant wait to read the next one.:p
a lil short.but it was a good chap.cant wait to read the next one.:p
9/6/2007 c2 JT FAN
i love it! please update soo.cant wait to read the next chap.
i love it! please update soo.cant wait to read the next chap.
9/6/2007 c2
6A. Richter
Oh my God! Red Hot Chili Peppers! Scar Tissue is my Bible. I am so happy you are writing this story. Seriously.

Oh my God! Red Hot Chili Peppers! Scar Tissue is my Bible. I am so happy you are writing this story. Seriously.