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11/4/2007 c1 332smile for the sunshine
I like the ending. That was my favorite part. It was nice. I kidna like this. Again, simple and short but it works. Good job!
10/20/2007 c1 10Pushing Daffodils
I play bass clarinet, too! Sadly, I feel as though I may have inspired a poem like this before.

I'm sorry that you're jealous, but it's good to have a vessel to release your emotions into.

: )
10/8/2007 c1 50Zeurpiet
This produces vivid imagery and is very well written. Jealousy is an emotion we can all relate to and you did a very good job of portraying it. Keep up the good work!
10/1/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Jealousy isn't a good emotion, but it is natural.

Good job.

~Twilight Starr~
9/22/2007 c1 18found.eventually
i guess i can relate to that poem. everyone gets jealous every once in a while, ESPECIALLY when you work really hard for something and yet other people gets the attention.

great job. :)
9/14/2007 c1 87Kissing Concrete
wait... just like your pen name! ha ha... anyway, nice poem, i actually had this feeling today, (except for the dying part) when i didnt get to play in my volleyball game even though i havent missed a practice...
9/10/2007 c1 lymli
I like the flow in the poem that's dark, interesting by the way.
9/6/2007 c1 191nine iron
Nice work! Its in the style I do enjoy, maybe try reading my Jelousy Haiku poems!

Keep writing,

Nine

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