for Pandora, The Zombie9/7/2007 c1 The Intelligent Designer
Yeah...like she said...alien. I'm imagining some futuristic society...but I'm not entirely sure I'm supposed to...it's good, and again,. like she said, it puts you on edge. It's almost an unpleasant fdeeling actually, reading this. It makes me feel tense and irritated...but thats good that it is written weel enough to affect me.
Yeah...like she said...alien. I'm imagining some futuristic society...but I'm not entirely sure I'm supposed to...it's good, and again,. like she said, it puts you on edge. It's almost an unpleasant fdeeling actually, reading this. It makes me feel tense and irritated...but thats good that it is written weel enough to affect me.
9/6/2007 c1 
18fredtheflyingfish
This is really, really good. I think it's great how you put everything on a separate line, since it shows how disconnected it is. And I love how she's just learning about feelings. And I love...you. In a strictly platonic way of course.
Anyways update as soon as you can. This is awesome.
18fredtheflyingfishThis is really, really good. I think it's great how you put everything on a separate line, since it shows how disconnected it is. And I love how she's just learning about feelings. And I love...you. In a strictly platonic way of course.
Anyways update as soon as you can. This is awesome.
9/6/2007 c1 2sicklysnowwhite
it seems short. kinda really short. like not much happened. Its strange how its not a poem. I mean, it is kind of a poem. but its not. maybe you should mark that at the top.
but it was good, interesting... weird. very very different. you're strangely creative. this is very good, and im putting it on my favorites. its fun to read. but it kinda puts you on edge. this is alien. but its good.
2sicklysnowwhiteit seems short. kinda really short. like not much happened. Its strange how its not a poem. I mean, it is kind of a poem. but its not. maybe you should mark that at the top.
but it was good, interesting... weird. very very different. you're strangely creative. this is very good, and im putting it on my favorites. its fun to read. but it kinda puts you on edge. this is alien. but its good.