for A Sea of Memory8/24/2009 c1 
7Scarlett Starlet
Wow. Normally so much description weighs the story down, but you did it so artfully; I loved it. The entire thing was beautifully written, and the end was so sad. Lovely job :)
7Scarlett StarletWow. Normally so much description weighs the story down, but you did it so artfully; I loved it. The entire thing was beautifully written, and the end was so sad. Lovely job :)
12/8/2007 c1 118Alpha de la Omega
This is deeply moving. The fear of life mingled with the fear of death. Loved the ending especially.
118Alpha de la OmegaThis is deeply moving. The fear of life mingled with the fear of death. Loved the ending especially.
9/8/2007 c1 leigh-rohan
This story was awesome! The description you used was absolutely amazing, the words you used created a clear picture in my mind, i could see a girl on a beach in the dark with the beautiful sparkling stars and the cold water rushing in. I wish I could write like you did, it was so good!
This story was awesome! The description you used was absolutely amazing, the words you used created a clear picture in my mind, i could see a girl on a beach in the dark with the beautiful sparkling stars and the cold water rushing in. I wish I could write like you did, it was so good!