for The Girlfriend3/8/2017 c22 
13Shailaputri
What to say..While starting the story it was quite interesting..but after half of the part it started to unnecessary dragged. And actually she seems to be kind of fangirl (while loving him because obviously she is not aware of him much before that) not a kind of lover. And he too doesn't seems to be managing very well with his problems. If media starts to think something he will make it true. That is all his personality. See, first the media thought that he was womanizer. He wants to make it true. And he was threatened he will lose his offer if he is seems so, then to escape from media he made her to act as girlfriend. His life is kind of controlled by media and others. He doesn't show enough strong control over his life. To me Will seems to have better control over it. Doesn't seems to be a working pair.
13ShailaputriWhat to say..While starting the story it was quite interesting..but after half of the part it started to unnecessary dragged. And actually she seems to be kind of fangirl (while loving him because obviously she is not aware of him much before that) not a kind of lover. And he too doesn't seems to be managing very well with his problems. If media starts to think something he will make it true. That is all his personality. See, first the media thought that he was womanizer. He wants to make it true. And he was threatened he will lose his offer if he is seems so, then to escape from media he made her to act as girlfriend. His life is kind of controlled by media and others. He doesn't show enough strong control over his life. To me Will seems to have better control over it. Doesn't seems to be a working pair.
2/28/2014 c12 MusicGurl8129
Yay! Justin & Emma are going to be together! But, Liv. Ooh, that makes the Story even more interesting! Crazy stalker Fans, crazy stalker Ex-Girlfriends (who Justin is still into), a Best Friend who's in love with him and Paparazzi willing to do anything to get the inside scoop! Loving this!
Yay! Justin & Emma are going to be together! But, Liv. Ooh, that makes the Story even more interesting! Crazy stalker Fans, crazy stalker Ex-Girlfriends (who Justin is still into), a Best Friend who's in love with him and Paparazzi willing to do anything to get the inside scoop! Loving this!
11/16/2012 c21 4R. Ficst
I loved it! Wonderful work. Adorable characters and great drama. Thanks so much for posting!
4R. FicstI loved it! Wonderful work. Adorable characters and great drama. Thanks so much for posting!
12/12/2011 c14 gabriella
I like your story but I find Emma to be a drama queen. Why does she burst into tears and run away anytime she feels upset about something. There was no need for her to make a huge scene after that argument. She could have waited until they got to the hotel. Also, she ripped out her IV, scooted away from Justin so much that she fell off the bed, and other overly dramatic things. This is more drama than a cheesy Hallmark movie.
I like your story but I find Emma to be a drama queen. Why does she burst into tears and run away anytime she feels upset about something. There was no need for her to make a huge scene after that argument. She could have waited until they got to the hotel. Also, she ripped out her IV, scooted away from Justin so much that she fell off the bed, and other overly dramatic things. This is more drama than a cheesy Hallmark movie.
6/24/2011 c1 witeaya
i love the earlier parts of the story.
justin was so sweet and all but when the blackmailing part came out i find the story and characters(esp justin's) a bit too dramatic and annoying.
lets see,i find that justin just agreeing to marry isabelle without much a fight showed that he didnt 'love' emma enough.
ok, he loved his career more. obviously emma should stop chasing him all over the world and leave that selfish prick. how she didnt see that i dont know.
what? he didnt want to taint isabelle's image? she had to man u to her mistakes. why he was hell bend to protect her but not his and emma's relationship? at this point i already hate him.
it's a real shame cause he was real nice character to begin with.
and eric was such a bad friend.he was afraid of isabelle and bc of that not doing anything to make his friend do the right thing?wimp,really.
im sorry if im harsh but it's just my opinion.
im not hating the story just how the characters were portrayed.
i love the earlier parts of the story.
justin was so sweet and all but when the blackmailing part came out i find the story and characters(esp justin's) a bit too dramatic and annoying.
lets see,i find that justin just agreeing to marry isabelle without much a fight showed that he didnt 'love' emma enough.
ok, he loved his career more. obviously emma should stop chasing him all over the world and leave that selfish prick. how she didnt see that i dont know.
what? he didnt want to taint isabelle's image? she had to man u to her mistakes. why he was hell bend to protect her but not his and emma's relationship? at this point i already hate him.
it's a real shame cause he was real nice character to begin with.
and eric was such a bad friend.he was afraid of isabelle and bc of that not doing anything to make his friend do the right thing?wimp,really.
im sorry if im harsh but it's just my opinion.
im not hating the story just how the characters were portrayed.
3/13/2011 c21 4Boosher
This story is amazing! You are a great writer! I really loved Emma'a character and Justin was amazing! Can't wait to read another one of your stories!
4BoosherThis story is amazing! You are a great writer! I really loved Emma'a character and Justin was amazing! Can't wait to read another one of your stories!
8/15/2010 c22 13Xxluvbugger213xX
Hi! I really like this story, it's not a straight forward romance and all cliche like most like the part in the middle with Isabelle and Alexander and Will too ( :
Love it!
I'm going to read the sequel next! ( :
13Xxluvbugger213xXHi! I really like this story, it's not a straight forward romance and all cliche like most like the part in the middle with Isabelle and Alexander and Will too ( :
Love it!
I'm going to read the sequel next! ( :
7/17/2010 c5 1curiousone
Lolz d part where she guessed her shoe size totally reminded me of pretty woman... So cute :p
1curiousoneLolz d part where she guessed her shoe size totally reminded me of pretty woman... So cute :p
8/11/2009 c21 abbsi
Okay, two things.
One, you have a contradiction about the blackmail Isabelle used. At one point, the housekeeper reports that Justin mutters about Isabelle telling the press how he and Emma really met. Then later, you change it to the baby story.
Two, the baby story makes Justin's personality seem very weak. I mean, he'd give up the woman he loves so that his ex-girlfriend who cheated on him won't have to lie in the bed she made? And it doesn't even look like he put up much of a fight, either. :-| But that's my opinion of how his personality comes off.
Okay, two things.
One, you have a contradiction about the blackmail Isabelle used. At one point, the housekeeper reports that Justin mutters about Isabelle telling the press how he and Emma really met. Then later, you change it to the baby story.
Two, the baby story makes Justin's personality seem very weak. I mean, he'd give up the woman he loves so that his ex-girlfriend who cheated on him won't have to lie in the bed she made? And it doesn't even look like he put up much of a fight, either. :-| But that's my opinion of how his personality comes off.
6/29/2009 c21 animegirl214
oh my gosh! :D :D :D
i loved it! :] this story totally made my boring summer day. :P lol
oh my gosh! :D :D :D
i loved it! :] this story totally made my boring summer day. :P lol