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9/20/2007 c1 19Core Satiated
Wow, that is so intense. I love that concept of nature as the audience...and capturing that whole outdoor sensation. This was a great piece!

The ending was really nice, tying it all into true love.

Here's a spin...what happens when your "audience" is watching during a "not so good" performance, say, a dark time in your life?
9/10/2007 c1 102InkandIntrospection
I like the extended metaphor, particularly all the nature personification. After your review, I find it interesting to see how our styles differ, so naturally, I would give you the opposite advice: Don't be afraid of the extremely abstract. Intentional ambiguity can be thought-provoking and effective for certain pieces. For this poem, I think the perspective that you have suits it very well, clear but deep, but hearing from people of differing styles always helps me, at least, branch out as a poet. (No pun intended.) Thank you very much for your review.

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