for Ensain: Death Rush2/18/2008 c1 
3Madness-Soldier
This was so oddly disturbing, yet I LOVE IT! Maybe it is my sadistic tendencies that allow me to read this with a smile, but dammit if that is wrong then I don't know what is right. Anyway, very good visuals my friend, and keep up the work. Oh, and if you get the chance, check out my story Guilty Act, I think you might enjoy it.
3Madness-SoldierThis was so oddly disturbing, yet I LOVE IT! Maybe it is my sadistic tendencies that allow me to read this with a smile, but dammit if that is wrong then I don't know what is right. Anyway, very good visuals my friend, and keep up the work. Oh, and if you get the chance, check out my story Guilty Act, I think you might enjoy it.
1/6/2008 c1 26Melladonna
Is it sad that I like stuff like this? ^^; I'm a sucker for a good tragic tale or even horror-based fiction. I'm hopeless...Lol but do continue! I really like this!
26MelladonnaIs it sad that I like stuff like this? ^^; I'm a sucker for a good tragic tale or even horror-based fiction. I'm hopeless...Lol but do continue! I really like this!
11/23/2007 c1 6The Burnin' Rose
this is definitely the most emo, insane thing ive ever read. good writing overall, just very... saw-ish.
6The Burnin' Rosethis is definitely the most emo, insane thing ive ever read. good writing overall, just very... saw-ish.
11/7/2007 c1 22Erich Sturmburg
Heya, Outlaw-2 here, (Uhh... Outlaw-2 Extreme actually for the time being due to heavy overhauling :P)
I've read through the prose, and what can I say; I used to write this type of prose few years ago before "Tokyo Battalions" was born (It was called "Unfinished Business" at that point of time). Very bloody and gory, it really brings me back to how I wrote back then.
Plot-wise, is good, and the descriptions are very vivid. A powerful prose as well in my terms. And the funny thing is, one song actually fits with the chapter; The Virus Of Life by Slipknot. Storylining is interesting, and catch my interest quite well. Keep up the pace, at least one chapter per month if you're struggling. Though I am guilty for doing one chapter in three months for once. :P
O² Extreme, Valhalla
P.S. Yes, I've did a overhaul on Tokyo Battalions, this time calling it 'Tokyo Battalions EX'. The storyline is slightly different, so does the characters. Hope to see another from you so I can drop another review for this prose.
22Erich SturmburgHeya, Outlaw-2 here, (Uhh... Outlaw-2 Extreme actually for the time being due to heavy overhauling :P)
I've read through the prose, and what can I say; I used to write this type of prose few years ago before "Tokyo Battalions" was born (It was called "Unfinished Business" at that point of time). Very bloody and gory, it really brings me back to how I wrote back then.
Plot-wise, is good, and the descriptions are very vivid. A powerful prose as well in my terms. And the funny thing is, one song actually fits with the chapter; The Virus Of Life by Slipknot. Storylining is interesting, and catch my interest quite well. Keep up the pace, at least one chapter per month if you're struggling. Though I am guilty for doing one chapter in three months for once. :P
O² Extreme, Valhalla
P.S. Yes, I've did a overhaul on Tokyo Battalions, this time calling it 'Tokyo Battalions EX'. The storyline is slightly different, so does the characters. Hope to see another from you so I can drop another review for this prose.
10/29/2007 c1 9hiro0911
This is freaky... That's what I call mad murderer... And the descriptions added up to its overall 'darkness'. You described the eerie setting almost perfectly.
You're a talented writer. But wait, you haven't updated for sometime now...
~hiro
9hiro0911This is freaky... That's what I call mad murderer... And the descriptions added up to its overall 'darkness'. You described the eerie setting almost perfectly.
You're a talented writer. But wait, you haven't updated for sometime now...
~hiro
9/14/2007 c1 Denzel'sCRIMSON
Cool fic, although the main guy kind of freaks me out a bit. Like think about it. You in some school and you know that some freakish physcopath is in there just ready to hack your ass off just because he hates the world. On top of that, he's going to do it with a scythe! Picturing that way kind of makes me shudder. Anyway, it's really cool. I'd like to learn more about it soon. Keep up the good work and I hope you like the changes.
Later, man.
Cool fic, although the main guy kind of freaks me out a bit. Like think about it. You in some school and you know that some freakish physcopath is in there just ready to hack your ass off just because he hates the world. On top of that, he's going to do it with a scythe! Picturing that way kind of makes me shudder. Anyway, it's really cool. I'd like to learn more about it soon. Keep up the good work and I hope you like the changes.
Later, man.
9/13/2007 c1 3Ash of The Wind
You've been talking about this story for a while so I'm glad to see it up. Its sorta like a video game you've studied up on and you finally get to check it out. We've been discussing it alot so I'm curious to see how the things we talked about will be worked in. I'm impressed and wasnt as grossed out as I thought I'd be.
3Ash of The WindYou've been talking about this story for a while so I'm glad to see it up. Its sorta like a video game you've studied up on and you finally get to check it out. We've been discussing it alot so I'm curious to see how the things we talked about will be worked in. I'm impressed and wasnt as grossed out as I thought I'd be.