for Children of Hollywood10/19/2015 c3 auroraglider
Great chapter. You portray these high school kids very realistically. I mean, weren't we all a little "out-spoken" at that age, only to soon regret our outbursts?
Great chapter. You portray these high school kids very realistically. I mean, weren't we all a little "out-spoken" at that age, only to soon regret our outbursts?
10/19/2015 c2 auroraglider
I am really enjoying this story. It's refreshingly different from most of the stories I read on hear.
I am really enjoying this story. It's refreshingly different from most of the stories I read on hear.
10/19/2015 c1 auroraglider
I just read your other story yesterday and loved it, so I thought I would try this one. One chapter in and I can already tell I'm going to enjoy this one as well. You are a very good writer and I'm glad I came across these stories.
I just read your other story yesterday and loved it, so I thought I would try this one. One chapter in and I can already tell I'm going to enjoy this one as well. You are a very good writer and I'm glad I came across these stories.
8/24/2015 c12 Sara
u hav got to update. Srsly, I am dying bc every good story I read is incomplete. Pls update soon
u hav got to update. Srsly, I am dying bc every good story I read is incomplete. Pls update soon
7/2/2013 c12 
6CharBLord
Are you not writing this story anymore? I very much enjoyed it and I would like to read more!
6CharBLordAre you not writing this story anymore? I very much enjoyed it and I would like to read more!
7/19/2012 c12 RubyRed22
I love this story so much! I really wish you would update, but I know after four years, the chances of that happening aren't very large... It's too bad though, because I so wanted to see how the story would have played out!
I love this story so much! I really wish you would update, but I know after four years, the chances of that happening aren't very large... It's too bad though, because I so wanted to see how the story would have played out!
4/13/2012 c12 1TheLittleGirlWithAFrenchBeret
so what happened to the 'I haven't dropped off the face of the planet' thing, cause it kinda looks like that's exactly what happened. Oh gosh just thought of a horrible scenario- you haven't written cause you're dead. That was a terrible thought! ok back to regular- this story has a lot of things going for it (Tyler not being one of them, creeper) and I really think you should continue writing! ...Maybe it's just me
1TheLittleGirlWithAFrenchBeretso what happened to the 'I haven't dropped off the face of the planet' thing, cause it kinda looks like that's exactly what happened. Oh gosh just thought of a horrible scenario- you haven't written cause you're dead. That was a terrible thought! ok back to regular- this story has a lot of things going for it (Tyler not being one of them, creeper) and I really think you should continue writing! ...Maybe it's just me
4/13/2012 c8 TheLittleGirlWithAFrenchBeret
So I have a hard time believing that Kendall would still 'barely stand Devon in person' because really one you spend a lot of time with someone and get to know them -I'm assuming ESPECIALLY if it's that intimately- you no longer hate them and usually probably don't even dislike them. Also I think if you had a little more lead up of like what they actually talked about and acted like around each other in Antarctica then they wouldn't be acting so much like this...
So I have a hard time believing that Kendall would still 'barely stand Devon in person' because really one you spend a lot of time with someone and get to know them -I'm assuming ESPECIALLY if it's that intimately- you no longer hate them and usually probably don't even dislike them. Also I think if you had a little more lead up of like what they actually talked about and acted like around each other in Antarctica then they wouldn't be acting so much like this...