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11/4/2007 c1 332smile for the sunshine
I like this one too. I think the format here is nice. I like that lots.
10/11/2007 c1 7daretobe-dIfFeRnT
awh! sad!

i read this as a song, i don't really know why...lol its good!
10/6/2007 c1 87Kissing Concrete
gorgeous. love it.
10/1/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Great poem.

You have a bright future. :)

~Twilight Starr~
9/22/2007 c1 18found.eventually
that was good! there's one thing i don't really get, though.

a future i what I hope

I don't know what's next, except for darkness.

uh, so the darkness IS the future?

hahhaa. i suck at analysing poems. ehe.
9/21/2007 c1 lymli
it sounds like a cool song, really the rhyme is good.

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