for Objects in the Mirror6/16/2009 c17 IWantMore
AH so good! :D I wish you had more readers...people don't know what they're missing! lol This was such a great chapter! And Tara...FINALLY someone told her Miranda was a lying Bee with an itch. Sheesh! I thought her mom would at least tell her... but what are Bff for... :)
I'm guessing, Gabe is going to take Ari's car down to her house...that would be awesome... and when Ari sees that he went through that to see her, then she'll HAVE to know he wasn't joking. :)
Thanks again for the great read! You're so awesome!
AH so good! :D I wish you had more readers...people don't know what they're missing! lol This was such a great chapter! And Tara...FINALLY someone told her Miranda was a lying Bee with an itch. Sheesh! I thought her mom would at least tell her... but what are Bff for... :)
I'm guessing, Gabe is going to take Ari's car down to her house...that would be awesome... and when Ari sees that he went through that to see her, then she'll HAVE to know he wasn't joking. :)
Thanks again for the great read! You're so awesome!
6/15/2009 c17 Eclipsed Mind
ah, i understand now. The last chapter threw me off a bit when you said it was the end. I'm glad you continued the story and am eager to read the next one.
ah, i understand now. The last chapter threw me off a bit when you said it was the end. I'm glad you continued the story and am eager to read the next one.
6/8/2009 c16 
2righthere431
Oh no, I really hope that Miranda is lying to her because I don't think Gabe would do that!
2righthere431Oh no, I really hope that Miranda is lying to her because I don't think Gabe would do that!
6/7/2009 c16 IWantMore
Woah good thing you wrote that note at the end...I thought that was really the end...and for those few seconds I lost all respect/admiration for you...lol but now you have them all back! haha great chapter...
Surprise surprise...Miranda is still an itching B making up stories about Gabe to have him all to herself...and duh, the CDs were full of drugs! lol I still think Gabe is amazing...partly cuz all your main guys are, partly cuz I fell for him and partly because...well I guess there's only two partlys...LOL
anyways! Thanks for the great read! It was ggrreeaatt! Hope if ends well.
Woah good thing you wrote that note at the end...I thought that was really the end...and for those few seconds I lost all respect/admiration for you...lol but now you have them all back! haha great chapter...
Surprise surprise...Miranda is still an itching B making up stories about Gabe to have him all to herself...and duh, the CDs were full of drugs! lol I still think Gabe is amazing...partly cuz all your main guys are, partly cuz I fell for him and partly because...well I guess there's only two partlys...LOL
anyways! Thanks for the great read! It was ggrreeaatt! Hope if ends well.
6/6/2009 c16 Eclipsed Mind
hi, I really like your story and how developed your characters are. This last entry though is really confusing to me though. Miranda and Ari drove to new york in Ari's car and in this entry you have Ari leaving her car in New york, taking the subway and flying home. Why would she leave her car?
-Eclipsed Mind
hi, I really like your story and how developed your characters are. This last entry though is really confusing to me though. Miranda and Ari drove to new york in Ari's car and in this entry you have Ari leaving her car in New york, taking the subway and flying home. Why would she leave her car?
-Eclipsed Mind
5/26/2009 c15 IWantMore
omg, I had a HUGE review last time and it showed like the first few lines? WTH! oh well...I'm super upset though...that really sucks!
Well this chapter was great! I really liked it! Keep it coming! I really have no time to review...except I LOVE IT!
thanks a lot!
omg, I had a HUGE review last time and it showed like the first few lines? WTH! oh well...I'm super upset though...that really sucks!
Well this chapter was great! I really liked it! Keep it coming! I really have no time to review...except I LOVE IT!
thanks a lot!
5/24/2009 c15 Readaholic205
Alright, I havent read this story but I did read Want, Take, Have. I would REALLY appreciate it if you finished that one first. I know its on hold but I love WTH. I also have a recommendation. When/if you do decide to finish WTH then could you not get rid of the original and just post it separately as a rewrite or something?
~Readaholic205~
Alright, I havent read this story but I did read Want, Take, Have. I would REALLY appreciate it if you finished that one first. I know its on hold but I love WTH. I also have a recommendation. When/if you do decide to finish WTH then could you not get rid of the original and just post it separately as a rewrite or something?
~Readaholic205~
5/19/2009 c14 IWantMore
So this is me...reviewing as I go... :)
OH NO! Don't get the frozen waffles Ari! It's an evil plan by the horrid Miranda!
OH NO SHE DIDN"T! Gosh I hate her more and more! She's such a B with an itch... GRR
OOHH Gabe is showing her NY, what a sweety! :)
So this is me...reviewing as I go... :)
OH NO! Don't get the frozen waffles Ari! It's an evil plan by the horrid Miranda!
OH NO SHE DIDN"T! Gosh I hate her more and more! She's such a B with an itch... GRR
OOHH Gabe is showing her NY, what a sweety! :)
5/16/2009 c14 fyredea1994
GO ARI! Wonderful chappter, I'm just worried Miranda will pull some stupid shit.
GO ARI! Wonderful chappter, I'm just worried Miranda will pull some stupid shit.
5/4/2009 c13 IWantMore
This is an amazing story! I don't know why you don't have more readers... :S
And back to my incomprehensible sighing over Gabe...lol
He's amazing! And Ari...well I hope she finally makes a move! Good thing Tara called! I hope after her trip to NY, Ari NEVER speaks to Miranda again...and since "All's fair in love and war", maybe Ari should do something to Miranda... :S I dunno...probably not...OH and um, Jackie kind of reminds me of Rosalie in Twillight, well Rosalie mixed with Victoria...lol
Anyways...Love this story! And thanks for updating it!
AH I love Gabe... lol
This is an amazing story! I don't know why you don't have more readers... :S
And back to my incomprehensible sighing over Gabe...lol
He's amazing! And Ari...well I hope she finally makes a move! Good thing Tara called! I hope after her trip to NY, Ari NEVER speaks to Miranda again...and since "All's fair in love and war", maybe Ari should do something to Miranda... :S I dunno...probably not...OH and um, Jackie kind of reminds me of Rosalie in Twillight, well Rosalie mixed with Victoria...lol
Anyways...Love this story! And thanks for updating it!
AH I love Gabe... lol