for Objects in the Mirror9/27/2008 c10 
6givelifeyurall
i still don't understand why
there aren't more reviews.
this story has actual depth to it
cuz for awhile most stories on
here are the same boring plots.
great chapter, they are so cute!
btw i can totally relate to this story,
i use to be Ari and my friend Alanna
was Miranda, but alanna and i changed
and now were still good friends.
maybe Miranda can too
6givelifeyuralli still don't understand why
there aren't more reviews.
this story has actual depth to it
cuz for awhile most stories on
here are the same boring plots.
great chapter, they are so cute!
btw i can totally relate to this story,
i use to be Ari and my friend Alanna
was Miranda, but alanna and i changed
and now were still good friends.
maybe Miranda can too
9/10/2008 c9 11Seisaset
hahah yes please do finish. haha you make me feel bad for faded... but im turning some sort of remake in my head right now. i hate that too. especially if youre reading a mystery thing which I was once and then it just stopped. drove me crazy. haha well theres a guy and he and i spent a lot of time together over the summer but im unsure of his feelings for me (you can guess mine :P) and there is someone (some people) that are sort of between us of the female gender (my sister and his sister are best friends...) and there is the slight thing of him being almost four years older and also living in another country... quite complicated. im thinking about writing something short about it and letting my imagination run away with me at the end.
11Seisasethahah yes please do finish. haha you make me feel bad for faded... but im turning some sort of remake in my head right now. i hate that too. especially if youre reading a mystery thing which I was once and then it just stopped. drove me crazy. haha well theres a guy and he and i spent a lot of time together over the summer but im unsure of his feelings for me (you can guess mine :P) and there is someone (some people) that are sort of between us of the female gender (my sister and his sister are best friends...) and there is the slight thing of him being almost four years older and also living in another country... quite complicated. im thinking about writing something short about it and letting my imagination run away with me at the end.
8/31/2008 c9 6givelifeyurall
thanks for updating!
this girl needs to stop following
and do her own thing, she's only
regret it later if she doesn't do what
she wants, cuz miranda is a bitch,
she manipulates others to get what
she wants.
6givelifeyurallthanks for updating!
this girl needs to stop following
and do her own thing, she's only
regret it later if she doesn't do what
she wants, cuz miranda is a bitch,
she manipulates others to get what
she wants.
8/19/2008 c8 11Seisaset
so ive been away the last two months so i apologize for the lateness... however I really liked this chapter, getting to know/ being with Gabe (I've recently had similar experiences... so I can completely relate to the dissecting of moments) haha yes, I hate the one reviewer, thousands of hits situation. However, i love the story so please update soon :)
11Seisasetso ive been away the last two months so i apologize for the lateness... however I really liked this chapter, getting to know/ being with Gabe (I've recently had similar experiences... so I can completely relate to the dissecting of moments) haha yes, I hate the one reviewer, thousands of hits situation. However, i love the story so please update soon :)
6/16/2008 c7 Seisaset
you've done a really good job of that! I really like this chapter and you really got the embarassment (gah I can never spell that right! haha) through at the end. Please update soon :)
you've done a really good job of that! I really like this chapter and you really got the embarassment (gah I can never spell that right! haha) through at the end. Please update soon :)
5/11/2008 c6 Seisaset
yay chapter! i was reading this and although its not very much like it, it kind of is like when one of my best friends moved... and she moved to north carolina! and yes, gabe made this chapter rock but everything else was so... awkward. in like a good way. :) please update soon
yay chapter! i was reading this and although its not very much like it, it kind of is like when one of my best friends moved... and she moved to north carolina! and yes, gabe made this chapter rock but everything else was so... awkward. in like a good way. :) please update soon
5/11/2008 c6 22effervescent-sentiments
Yay! Another chapter!
Gabe definitely makes it more fun to read. However, I don't think you should make it QUITE so obvious that he's going to be "the one" ... maybe add in another likeable guy? Make him a bit more quirky? Whatever. Your story. :)
Beyond that, I just can't wait to see what happens.
Update sooner, pretty please!
22effervescent-sentimentsYay! Another chapter!
Gabe definitely makes it more fun to read. However, I don't think you should make it QUITE so obvious that he's going to be "the one" ... maybe add in another likeable guy? Make him a bit more quirky? Whatever. Your story. :)
Beyond that, I just can't wait to see what happens.
Update sooner, pretty please!
4/12/2008 c5 effervescent-sentiments
I'm betting the romantic interest is Gabe. Am I right? xD Sorry, I have to speculate.
Can't wait - my interest is officially piqued. Although Miranda is a total bitch of a character, I must say.
Cheers!
I'm betting the romantic interest is Gabe. Am I right? xD Sorry, I have to speculate.
Can't wait - my interest is officially piqued. Although Miranda is a total bitch of a character, I must say.
Cheers!
4/8/2008 c5 11Seisaset
Haha i loved your review on Faded btw.
Anyway, I liked the twist that you added with them missing the plane and ending up in the creepy hotel (you should make it a motel 6 haha) well, please update soon.
11SeisasetHaha i loved your review on Faded btw.
Anyway, I liked the twist that you added with them missing the plane and ending up in the creepy hotel (you should make it a motel 6 haha) well, please update soon.
3/31/2008 c4 22effervescent-sentiments
Oh, gosh! I didn't realize there was another chapter! Yay!
You really should update faster. *glare*
Hahaha.
Anyway, I'm glad she ditched Michael, but it's good that she's still holding on to Miranda . . . makes for a good plot, I think.
Please please please remember to structure your dialogue like this:
"Let's go to the mall," said Molly.
Comma, not period, and don't capitalize the "said."
Update soon, pretty please!
22effervescent-sentimentsOh, gosh! I didn't realize there was another chapter! Yay!
You really should update faster. *glare*
Hahaha.
Anyway, I'm glad she ditched Michael, but it's good that she's still holding on to Miranda . . . makes for a good plot, I think.
Please please please remember to structure your dialogue like this:
"Let's go to the mall," said Molly.
Comma, not period, and don't capitalize the "said."
Update soon, pretty please!
3/3/2008 c4 11Seisaset
haha no i like this. i cant wait to see what happens when she goes to new york. ugh michael is so gross. lol please update soon :)
omg i have to tell you im so proud of myself i updated faded! i know its like the fastest ever :D
11Seisasethaha no i like this. i cant wait to see what happens when she goes to new york. ugh michael is so gross. lol please update soon :)
omg i have to tell you im so proud of myself i updated faded! i know its like the fastest ever :D
2/11/2008 c3 17KeitaWolf
YAY you're back! If you could please have someone slap Miranda in the next chapter it would be much appreciated :P
This is awesome, keep up the great work!
17KeitaWolfYAY you're back! If you could please have someone slap Miranda in the next chapter it would be much appreciated :P
This is awesome, keep up the great work!
2/11/2008 c3 22effervescent-sentiments
I'm just trying to identify a romantic interest. You understand. Haha.
I'm so glad you're continuing posting! I've been craving your writing. Reread Love Me Not AND Sincerely Yours. Yeah, I'm pathetic.
Still your number one fan, but only if you post soon. Just kidding. Maybe.
Love from Julia!
22effervescent-sentimentsI'm just trying to identify a romantic interest. You understand. Haha.
I'm so glad you're continuing posting! I've been craving your writing. Reread Love Me Not AND Sincerely Yours. Yeah, I'm pathetic.
Still your number one fan, but only if you post soon. Just kidding. Maybe.
Love from Julia!
2/11/2008 c3 11Seisaset
haha don't worry, i just came back from being off for months too. lol liked the story. ugh but miranda gets on my nerves. haha like you said girls dont like her. and i dont hate this story... yet. haha im just kidding please update soon i like it!
11Seisasethaha don't worry, i just came back from being off for months too. lol liked the story. ugh but miranda gets on my nerves. haha like you said girls dont like her. and i dont hate this story... yet. haha im just kidding please update soon i like it!
2/9/2008 c2 Seisaset
ah! finally this story is up! im so excited! i like it so far, but I can't wait to see what happens in her trip to NY. please update soon
ps- i finally update faded. I know it's been forever but the new chapter is really long im so proud of myself
ah! finally this story is up! im so excited! i like it so far, but I can't wait to see what happens in her trip to NY. please update soon
ps- i finally update faded. I know it's been forever but the new chapter is really long im so proud of myself