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10/11/2007 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Interestingly true, and thought provoking. Well written. MD:77.
10/5/2007 c1 Daerb
I'm in the strangest mood right now, chaty and giggles even. Just so you're warned. I may go on a reviewing spree.

The street quality of your poetry is oddly atractive. I'm sure I've told you that before. I'm not sure of the context of this piece, but I do love the way you leave off - the implied silence at the end is suppose to make readers think of the qualities of such a silence? If so, very clever of you.

StalkerX
9/18/2007 c1 57empathic life
Wow. I love it. Just the tone, and the absolutely magnificent way you cut it off all abruptly. One of those really profound poems, that just don't need any more words than necessary. Beautiful, as always. -e.l.
9/17/2007 c1 Fen-Shay
Makes you think. I like it.
9/16/2007 c1 18Sir Scott
Silence is a good weapon.

~SirScott
9/16/2007 c1 33WyrdWolf
I rather like this one in its entirety. I can't narrow it down, though, just overall liking-ness.

Wolfie

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