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10/26/2011 c1 8Dark Blue Lover
Must admit I don't really get this... but I like the contrast "the eve of New Year's" and "thirty seconds too late". Made me smile :) You should keep writing!
8/14/2009 c1 CCPerson
I don't get it 100%, but I think Carmine should be uppercase
9/20/2008 c1 14kit feral
I can't believe I've never read your work before.

You are truly amazing.

I love this.
8/14/2008 c1 4Anesther
I'm probably missing something-as I'm very slow-but I loved the poem nonetheless. You have a very unique writing style and it conveys the story in so little words. Great work.
7/29/2008 c1 588Setsuna529
Creative simile, I like it. :)
2/26/2008 c1 1FromMyBackyard
hahaha... that's creepy, especially when that's been my own life at times when it really counted that things go according to plan.

they never do.
1/5/2008 c1 69Captain-Dalien
Very nice job. It was short, but effective. Life is ironic, isn't it? Kudos. ~CD
1/3/2008 c1 31Lurid Black
Simple yet well written, I like this.

Thnx for the constructive criticism, i'll look out for things like those k. =]
1/2/2008 c1 50tonight we storm
too good.
1/1/2008 c1 i'd delete this if possible
"she was bright, brilliant, and/thirty seconds too late." lovely. brought a smile to my face, that's for sure. :)
12/22/2007 c1 265Autumn Lace
It was catchy. I liked it. Keep writing.

12/9/2007 c1 30Honey Nut Loop and m-j
So true. Congratulations. You made me chuckle.
11/30/2007 c1 88Chidori Nadare
Very lovely personification and it's an amusing poem. You should post stuff like this, you don't see them often and I like being entertained by your works. Good job!

11/23/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Interesting poem. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
11/11/2007 c1 18little boy on her bike
i love the sardonicasocity... and no, that's not a word.
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