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8Dark Blue Lover
Must admit I don't really get this... but I like the contrast "the eve of New Year's" and "thirty seconds too late". Made me smile :) You should keep writing!
8Dark Blue LoverMust admit I don't really get this... but I like the contrast "the eve of New Year's" and "thirty seconds too late". Made me smile :) You should keep writing!
8/14/2009 c1 CCPerson
I don't get it 100%, but I think Carmine should be uppercase
I don't get it 100%, but I think Carmine should be uppercase
9/20/2008 c1 14kit feral
I can't believe I've never read your work before.
You are truly amazing.
I love this.
14kit feralI can't believe I've never read your work before.
You are truly amazing.
I love this.
8/14/2008 c1 4Anesther
I'm probably missing something-as I'm very slow-but I loved the poem nonetheless. You have a very unique writing style and it conveys the story in so little words. Great work.
4AnestherI'm probably missing something-as I'm very slow-but I loved the poem nonetheless. You have a very unique writing style and it conveys the story in so little words. Great work.
2/26/2008 c1 1FromMyBackyard
hahaha... that's creepy, especially when that's been my own life at times when it really counted that things go according to plan.
they never do.
1FromMyBackyardhahaha... that's creepy, especially when that's been my own life at times when it really counted that things go according to plan.
they never do.
1/5/2008 c1 69Captain-Dalien
Very nice job. It was short, but effective. Life is ironic, isn't it? Kudos. ~CD
69Captain-DalienVery nice job. It was short, but effective. Life is ironic, isn't it? Kudos. ~CD
1/3/2008 c1 31Lurid Black
Simple yet well written, I like this.
Thnx for the constructive criticism, i'll look out for things like those k. =]
31Lurid BlackSimple yet well written, I like this.
Thnx for the constructive criticism, i'll look out for things like those k. =]
1/1/2008 c1 i'd delete this if possible
"she was bright, brilliant, and/thirty seconds too late." lovely. brought a smile to my face, that's for sure. :)
"she was bright, brilliant, and/thirty seconds too late." lovely. brought a smile to my face, that's for sure. :)
11/30/2007 c1 88Chidori Nadare
Very lovely personification and it's an amusing poem. You should post stuff like this, you don't see them often and I like being entertained by your works. Good job!
-C.N
88Chidori NadareVery lovely personification and it's an amusing poem. You should post stuff like this, you don't see them often and I like being entertained by your works. Good job!
-C.N