for Blemished10/14/2007 c1 
93Alice Sleeps
I love how you can write so much and still keep the quality that a lot of people seem to lose. I absolutely love almost everything you write, and this one stands out even above the others.
93Alice SleepsI love how you can write so much and still keep the quality that a lot of people seem to lose. I absolutely love almost everything you write, and this one stands out even above the others.
10/4/2007 c1 22RavenclawMoose
I love this poem beyond words. It is perfect in it's portrayal of imperfection. I love irony. I can relate, too, to a love of imperfection. Imperfection can add spice, it's what makes everything unique.
~RM
22RavenclawMooseI love this poem beyond words. It is perfect in it's portrayal of imperfection. I love irony. I can relate, too, to a love of imperfection. Imperfection can add spice, it's what makes everything unique.
~RM
10/1/2007 c1 1relapse into change
'I adore mistakes
The way they slip off my tongue in that baby blue way
Innocent'
i love that the most, all i can say is this is amazing i wish i could write poetry like this :) good job
1relapse into change'I adore mistakes
The way they slip off my tongue in that baby blue way
Innocent'
i love that the most, all i can say is this is amazing i wish i could write poetry like this :) good job
9/29/2007 c1 half-sketched.staccatos
konban wa
... ... ... ...
Okay, hold it, I'm trying to get my brain to work better than the WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW that I'm getting right now, LoL. That's absolutely all I can think of at the moment, though. This poem left me speechless. What a brilliant, creepy piece! I love the insane tone it held, like the person narrating wasn't completely... well, sane. And I agree wholeheartedly with the "But I like to think of it as flawed ecstasy"
And with such speechlessness only comes one thing: *adds to favs* I hope to read many more from you. I'm STILL unable to come up with a suitable response for such a piece. Brilliant!
Zaijen
-Shan-
konban wa
... ... ... ...
Okay, hold it, I'm trying to get my brain to work better than the WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW that I'm getting right now, LoL. That's absolutely all I can think of at the moment, though. This poem left me speechless. What a brilliant, creepy piece! I love the insane tone it held, like the person narrating wasn't completely... well, sane. And I agree wholeheartedly with the "But I like to think of it as flawed ecstasy"
And with such speechlessness only comes one thing: *adds to favs* I hope to read many more from you. I'm STILL unable to come up with a suitable response for such a piece. Brilliant!
Zaijen
-Shan-
9/29/2007 c1 57Wear Me
i'm lost for words,
we're all just lost in words right?
beautiful (but i dont want to be too repetitive)
57Wear Mei'm lost for words,
we're all just lost in words right?
beautiful (but i dont want to be too repetitive)
9/25/2007 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
My initial reaction to this is 'wow' and then a very full speechlessness. The whole poem is perfect, you're voice has matured so much I can hardly believe it. 'baby blue way' 'licking the blood' the last two verses. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. I loved it. Keep up the good work, and post soon, I can't wait to read more.
Much love,
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietMy initial reaction to this is 'wow' and then a very full speechlessness. The whole poem is perfect, you're voice has matured so much I can hardly believe it. 'baby blue way' 'licking the blood' the last two verses. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. I loved it. Keep up the good work, and post soon, I can't wait to read more.
Much love,
Juliet.
9/24/2007 c1 88Chidori Nadare
The first line sounds so sweet and twisted, very attention-grabbing. Insanity=flawed ecstasy, that's so creative. You really have ways of putting words together. Great poem!
-C.N
88Chidori NadareThe first line sounds so sweet and twisted, very attention-grabbing. Insanity=flawed ecstasy, that's so creative. You really have ways of putting words together. Great poem!
-C.N
9/19/2007 c1 Jessie
Ah! I literally fell over in bed with this one. Amazing. That last stanza is undefinably monumantal.
Ah! I literally fell over in bed with this one. Amazing. That last stanza is undefinably monumantal.
9/18/2007 c1 Counting Petals
The first stanza got my attention, and the last left me with something to think about. The middle wasn't too bad either. ;) Nicely done, as usual!
The first stanza got my attention, and the last left me with something to think about. The middle wasn't too bad either. ;) Nicely done, as usual!
9/18/2007 c1 49Toxic.Industrial.Waste
The 1st stanza:
"I adore mistakes
The way they slip off my tongue in that baby blue way
Innocent"
It really got my attention. This is how I feel about flaws, as well. Great job. The last line is strong and ends it just right.
49Toxic.Industrial.WasteThe 1st stanza:
"I adore mistakes
The way they slip off my tongue in that baby blue way
Innocent"
It really got my attention. This is how I feel about flaws, as well. Great job. The last line is strong and ends it just right.
9/17/2007 c1 24axis.on.a.tilt
Your first two lines are
oh so
catching, hooking,
you have caught me in a snare.
On to read some more...
24axis.on.a.tiltYour first two lines are
oh so
catching, hooking,
you have caught me in a snare.
On to read some more...