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5/4/2008 c1 FlamingFlie
I don't normally review poems, so I don't know how good this review will be and how helpful it will be to you, but I liked it.

It flowed easily in my mind and had a very picturesque quality. It also had this sad feeling, I loved the lines

"the waters not bequeathing a

reflection, unfeasible as it is

to have light in a world of charcoal

without you" It's very life like and it compares to uncommon things very well.

I guess I really don't have any bad things to say about it; poetry is so loose and people can't define a certain way that it should be done.

~Flamingflie

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