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9/20/2007 c1 91fairytale failure
The use of parentheses in this piece was quite good. I really like the format you have going here and the content - wow. Especially the first 5, I just want to read them over and over again. This is awesome!
9/19/2007 c1 29diffident
This is an awesome example of proper use of emphasizers (like parenthesis, italics, and bold font) without overdoing it. Here, I think it helps emphasize your point. There are too many poems out there where these devices are overused to the point where they don't emphasize at all; they simply becoming overkill & annoying.

The phrasing and descriptions here are so poetic & delicate and that is lovely as well. This is a great poem overall. Excellent job.

marie

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