for this night long and tangled11/20/2007 c1 
70this is britt
as well as poetry- beautiful poetry- this would work as some poetry/prose hybrid, I think, rather well. it's good. it's so good. I want to say something constructive, but I can't, so: you always seem to write the poetry I myself would like to learn how to write. just purely amazing stuff.
70this is brittas well as poetry- beautiful poetry- this would work as some poetry/prose hybrid, I think, rather well. it's good. it's so good. I want to say something constructive, but I can't, so: you always seem to write the poetry I myself would like to learn how to write. just purely amazing stuff.
11/8/2007 c1 612simpleplan13
I love the simile in the last line... the whole piece is great... I like how they both starts with oh
612simpleplan13I love the simile in the last line... the whole piece is great... I like how they both starts with oh
10/16/2007 c1 64not sure yet
i totally dig the last line of this, very rushed feel to the whole poem that was kinda cool and fit with the train, fun stuff
64not sure yeti totally dig the last line of this, very rushed feel to the whole poem that was kinda cool and fit with the train, fun stuff
9/19/2007 c1 67Lost In Context
This seems to perfectly describe the way I feel sometimes, with a thousand thoughts crashing around inside my brain.
"you with your thing wail of leaving/ of longing-" My favorite line. It's just lovely. :)
67Lost In ContextThis seems to perfectly describe the way I feel sometimes, with a thousand thoughts crashing around inside my brain.
"you with your thing wail of leaving/ of longing-" My favorite line. It's just lovely. :)
9/19/2007 c1 24sincerely disregard
very Dickinsonesque with the dashes. I really enjoy 'bursting inside of my head with cauterized limbs' and the flow of this piece. nice job.
24sincerely disregardvery Dickinsonesque with the dashes. I really enjoy 'bursting inside of my head with cauterized limbs' and the flow of this piece. nice job.