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for this night long and tangled

11/20/2007 c1 69this is britt
as well as poetry- beautiful poetry- this would work as some poetry/prose hybrid, I think, rather well. it's good. it's so good. I want to say something constructive, but I can't, so: you always seem to write the poetry I myself would like to learn how to write. just purely amazing stuff.
11/8/2007 c1 612simpleplan13
I love the simile in the last line... the whole piece is great... I like how they both starts with oh
10/16/2007 c1 64not sure yet
i totally dig the last line of this, very rushed feel to the whole poem that was kinda cool and fit with the train, fun stuff
9/19/2007 c1 67Lost In Context
This seems to perfectly describe the way I feel sometimes, with a thousand thoughts crashing around inside my brain.

"you with your thing wail of leaving/ of longing-" My favorite line. It's just lovely. :)
9/19/2007 c1 24sincerely disregard
very Dickinsonesque with the dashes. I really enjoy 'bursting inside of my head with cauterized limbs' and the flow of this piece. nice job.

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