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4/24/2008 c1 26LoSt ReMeDy
hi!

It's short but I like it! Again nice setting out...It makes the poem look heaps cool! But yea, I liked it!

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2/19/2008 c1 64fatbird33
this poem made me smile, not because i love what's going to happen to the world, but becasue it was very well written which made me smile.
11/7/2007 c1 34Lyra Pocaterra
I really like this poem, it is short but effective and has a great impact. The way you have alternated verse with a single line works great, repeating the structure... it´s a very grave poem, sadly true.
9/20/2007 c1 26Michael Kim
i think its better to be NOT abstract for poems like this

use less cryptic diction, and you can have a masterpiece

i love the idea though: repetition, then contrast. (very classic)

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