
12/5/2007 c1
65Nemonus
Very good. This could be a song. The chorus is open to interpretation and has strong wording. I like how "it ends tonight" is in quotations...lol, cause it's used often. "my feels get what they deserve" deserves some more exploring. I'd like to see a prose piece about this event.

Very good. This could be a song. The chorus is open to interpretation and has strong wording. I like how "it ends tonight" is in quotations...lol, cause it's used often. "my feels get what they deserve" deserves some more exploring. I'd like to see a prose piece about this event.