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11/17/2007 c1 97rust phoenix
I like the format. The italics/bolding/parenthesese all seem very purposefully chosen and fit in perfectly. The last lines of each stanza are the strongest parts, which makes sense because of the slight pause in the flow between stanzas, where the reader has a chance to process the writing. I don't know if I'm making any sense. The point is, I really like your poem. Keep writing!
9/27/2007 c1 92burning in effigy
this made me smile :)

interesting mix of words and phrases, and i must say i love the entire thing (especially the last stanza)
9/24/2007 c1 she smolders
I love the defiant yet lost feel to your poetry. Keep writing.
9/21/2007 c1 Kindre Turnany
I liked the first stanza

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