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33WyrdWolfWell, this is a very blunt look at a common phrase. Interesting; no one does it enough. Nothing inspiring, but entertaining, sure.
Wolfie
9/30/2007 c1 56felicia13Can't say I'm incredibly fond of this, Bread, old chap. You have two commas and one period and that's just not right. More belong scattered about this poem (just because there's a line break, it's not ok to leave off the commas). Rawr.
Sometimes you make me sad.
Felicia.
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