
12/17/2007 c1
87R.J. Crosbie
I've never read a poem with *contemporary language*. It was pretty funny to read it in a poem: "Huh? Who knows?" "I mean, who is really normal, anyway? Gawd, no one." This puts everone's surface secrets on one page. Or webpage. You get my drift. An excellent poem.

I've never read a poem with *contemporary language*. It was pretty funny to read it in a poem: "Huh? Who knows?" "I mean, who is really normal, anyway? Gawd, no one." This puts everone's surface secrets on one page. Or webpage. You get my drift. An excellent poem.