for A Man Who Makes You Cry Isn't Worth Your Tears7/6/2008 c1 
2Nienna Bella
A good short read. I enjoyed it. You may want to work on your grammar and punctuation though.
Other than that it's a cute love story with a nice message. ^^
2Nienna BellaA good short read. I enjoyed it. You may want to work on your grammar and punctuation though.
Other than that it's a cute love story with a nice message. ^^
6/27/2008 c1 5L K Blake
Aww, that's so nice... why the hell can't i wright a short story that long? lol
anyway, it's a very nice quick read :) i like very much.
5L K BlakeAww, that's so nice... why the hell can't i wright a short story that long? lol
anyway, it's a very nice quick read :) i like very much.
4/11/2008 c1 misery sister
This is a good story, sadly, it's burdened by missing punctuation and poor grammar. I suggest a Beta reader if you want to get ride of that and get the full emotion of the story.
This is a good story, sadly, it's burdened by missing punctuation and poor grammar. I suggest a Beta reader if you want to get ride of that and get the full emotion of the story.
10/7/2007 c1 15Amei666
Hell, I'm not interesting... Anyway, this portratys your personality perfectly... It's kinda scary how you think you romantic...
15Amei666Hell, I'm not interesting... Anyway, this portratys your personality perfectly... It's kinda scary how you think you romantic...
9/27/2007 c1 22BlorangeForever
What a great story with a bittersweet message. It isn't fair, is it. Whenever you fall the hardest for someone, he doesn't like you, and maybe someone else does but you always feel like it wouldn't be fair to either of you. I love the way you ended it on a hopeful note.
22BlorangeForeverWhat a great story with a bittersweet message. It isn't fair, is it. Whenever you fall the hardest for someone, he doesn't like you, and maybe someone else does but you always feel like it wouldn't be fair to either of you. I love the way you ended it on a hopeful note.