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8/12/2012 c1 10jm1681
Whoa... I did not see that coming.

Awesome, AWESOME story.
5/20/2012 c1 absentmindedprofessor
Sorry, not signed in :D But whoa, this was a really intense one. Imagine going through your whole life hating someone and being jealous of them only to find out that they actually hated you, and WHILE THEY WERE KILLING YOU was when you found out. Anyway, I really liked this story, all the emotion and hatred and stuff. I can sympathize with Dagmar's character, but I can also sympathize with Caryn, strangely. Anyway, great one-shot!
9/8/2009 c1 17Unique1952

I must say that I was expecting, or rather hoping for a twist at the end; Caryn's feelings were a nice touch.

I think that you've written this story very well and whle I don't typically like reading one-shots, I think that you did an excellent job with this.

I especiall like the lasy line: God is such a sadist - a perfect way to end this tale.

Again, nice work with this, I enjoyed reading this story.
6/25/2009 c1 22AnneAlysse
I don't really like to read things on the Internet anymore, but the summary of this caught my attention. I expected to get bored with it early on, like I always do with other people's stories, but I found myself hooked for some reason. The concept was amazing, the story was well-written, and the ending was freaking awesome. So...nice job! You should write more!
8/3/2008 c1 1N.S. Blanchard
Oh my god this is so twisted, I love it. I wonder where the inspiration for it came from.
4/26/2008 c1 1Seulement Sang
Loved it. Loved it, loved it, loved it. The plot twist was unexpected, the premise classic, and... Gah, I just loved it! Keep up the good work!
1/21/2008 c1 9Lerene
Wow, messed up family.
12/22/2007 c1 deletedaccount8899066
I agree with your mother

That was disturbing

Strangely enough, I also felt as if I wanted to kill Caryn.

Nice story, I enjoyed the plot twist. =]
10/26/2007 c1 anonymous
this looks familier like the Movie twisted sisters.
9/28/2007 c1 1soojinyeh
Oh dear. How I have had similar urges towards people. If only I could carry them out. Love it. Read and review me please.
9/24/2007 c1 5Cryptic Secrecy
Two minds

Come together as one

As evil Looms

They must sacrifice

Privacy, Independency,
9/24/2007 c1 Abby
freaking. awesome. i liked it; the irony is delicious, and you skillfully capture sensation of hating a sibling or popular girl.
9/24/2007 c1 26Michael Kim
eh... swan song..

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