for Swan Song5/20/2012 c1 absentmindedprofessor
Sorry, not signed in :D But whoa, this was a really intense one. Imagine going through your whole life hating someone and being jealous of them only to find out that they actually hated you, and WHILE THEY WERE KILLING YOU was when you found out. Anyway, I really liked this story, all the emotion and hatred and stuff. I can sympathize with Dagmar's character, but I can also sympathize with Caryn, strangely. Anyway, great one-shot!
Sorry, not signed in :D But whoa, this was a really intense one. Imagine going through your whole life hating someone and being jealous of them only to find out that they actually hated you, and WHILE THEY WERE KILLING YOU was when you found out. Anyway, I really liked this story, all the emotion and hatred and stuff. I can sympathize with Dagmar's character, but I can also sympathize with Caryn, strangely. Anyway, great one-shot!
9/8/2009 c1 
17Unique1952
Wow...
I must say that I was expecting, or rather hoping for a twist at the end; Caryn's feelings were a nice touch.
I think that you've written this story very well and whle I don't typically like reading one-shots, I think that you did an excellent job with this.
I especiall like the lasy line: God is such a sadist - a perfect way to end this tale.
Again, nice work with this, I enjoyed reading this story.
17Unique1952Wow...
I must say that I was expecting, or rather hoping for a twist at the end; Caryn's feelings were a nice touch.
I think that you've written this story very well and whle I don't typically like reading one-shots, I think that you did an excellent job with this.
I especiall like the lasy line: God is such a sadist - a perfect way to end this tale.
Again, nice work with this, I enjoyed reading this story.
6/25/2009 c1 22AnneAlysse
I don't really like to read things on the Internet anymore, but the summary of this caught my attention. I expected to get bored with it early on, like I always do with other people's stories, but I found myself hooked for some reason. The concept was amazing, the story was well-written, and the ending was freaking awesome. So...nice job! You should write more!
22AnneAlysseI don't really like to read things on the Internet anymore, but the summary of this caught my attention. I expected to get bored with it early on, like I always do with other people's stories, but I found myself hooked for some reason. The concept was amazing, the story was well-written, and the ending was freaking awesome. So...nice job! You should write more!
8/3/2008 c1 1N.S. Blanchard
Oh my god this is so twisted, I love it. I wonder where the inspiration for it came from.
1N.S. BlanchardOh my god this is so twisted, I love it. I wonder where the inspiration for it came from.
4/26/2008 c1 1Seulement Sang
Loved it. Loved it, loved it, loved it. The plot twist was unexpected, the premise classic, and... Gah, I just loved it! Keep up the good work!
1Seulement SangLoved it. Loved it, loved it, loved it. The plot twist was unexpected, the premise classic, and... Gah, I just loved it! Keep up the good work!
12/22/2007 c1 deletedaccount8899066
I agree with your mother
That was disturbing
Strangely enough, I also felt as if I wanted to kill Caryn.
Nice story, I enjoyed the plot twist. =]
I agree with your mother
That was disturbing
Strangely enough, I also felt as if I wanted to kill Caryn.
Nice story, I enjoyed the plot twist. =]
10/26/2007 c1 anonymous
this looks familier like the Movie twisted sisters.
this looks familier like the Movie twisted sisters.
9/28/2007 c1 1soojinyeh
Oh dear. How I have had similar urges towards people. If only I could carry them out. Love it. Read and review me please.
1soojinyehOh dear. How I have had similar urges towards people. If only I could carry them out. Love it. Read and review me please.
9/24/2007 c1 5Cryptic Secrecy
Two minds
Come together as one
As evil Looms
They must sacrifice
Privacy, Independency,
5Cryptic SecrecyTwo minds
Come together as one
As evil Looms
They must sacrifice
Privacy, Independency,
9/24/2007 c1 Abby
freaking. awesome. i liked it; the irony is delicious, and you skillfully capture sensation of hating a sibling or popular girl.
freaking. awesome. i liked it; the irony is delicious, and you skillfully capture sensation of hating a sibling or popular girl.