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11/4/2007 c1 332smile for the sunshine
I kinda like this. I would title it no answer. I get what you mean. I mean, I even wrote something called oops...about a school shooting because people tease these kids. So yeah, I kinda like this. And if you like that topic you should read things like White Rose (by smiling bob) and We have a choice (by sapphire serenity). Good work and keep writing. = )
10/11/2007 c1 7daretobe-dIfFeRnT
again, it's different, but thats a good thing:)

awh, she shouldn't care what people say! i bet it would get to a girl if she has to take it all the time though...
10/7/2007 c1 19Kyllorac
I really like how you conveyed the meaning of the poem with such simple words. I think you are missing a word between "The girl can" and "those nasty". Still, the meaning is very clear.
10/1/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Great poem.

I get teased about the way I dress, too. ^^

~Twilight Starr~

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