for Cockroach9/24/2007 c1 hey maria
"The good outweighed the bad," Shouldn't it read "the bad outweighed the good" since it was the bad deeds in its past life that made it into a roach?
I can't really pity the roach in this poem; it must have deserved its fate, after all. But, the poem itself was written well. Nice job.
"The good outweighed the bad," Shouldn't it read "the bad outweighed the good" since it was the bad deeds in its past life that made it into a roach?
I can't really pity the roach in this poem; it must have deserved its fate, after all. But, the poem itself was written well. Nice job.
9/24/2007 c1 
11Elle dont tu lis les histoires
wow-i love how it rhymes, but that's just the beginning. Beautiful imagery, and over all just a great poem. so touching and heartfelt.
good job.
11Elle dont tu lis les histoireswow-i love how it rhymes, but that's just the beginning. Beautiful imagery, and over all just a great poem. so touching and heartfelt.
good job.