1/5/2008 c1 Orual
You did a nice job with your rhymthm and turn of phrase in this poem. I would have liked it to be more anecdote based and more exclusive to meth because I think this poem could be about any drug, but that's up to you if you want to revise. Nice work on the whole.
You did a nice job with your rhymthm and turn of phrase in this poem. I would have liked it to be more anecdote based and more exclusive to meth because I think this poem could be about any drug, but that's up to you if you want to revise. Nice work on the whole.
12/24/2007 c1 5Ash of Lynne
Someone I knew really well died of meth... so I know this really has powerful meaning. Great work!
Someone I knew really well died of meth... so I know this really has powerful meaning. Great work!