for Broken Commitments11/17/2007 c11 michellehp5
It seems shorter. They aren't called waiters they are called buttlers or servants. You can hire them for a night or two. Like bartenders. Dude I'm sleepy right now r u?
It seems shorter. They aren't called waiters they are called buttlers or servants. You can hire them for a night or two. Like bartenders. Dude I'm sleepy right now r u?
11/13/2007 c10 michellehp5
Hey use stronger adjectives and language. That way it might not soudn so southern. Also dude you mispelled Sara. You spelled it Sra. It's near the begioning. ttyl. bye.
Hey use stronger adjectives and language. That way it might not soudn so southern. Also dude you mispelled Sara. You spelled it Sra. It's near the begioning. ttyl. bye.
11/7/2007 c9 not always
This is a good chapter! I can understand Tara a little better now that her mom is in the picture. You have a wonderful talent! Keep it up!
This is a good chapter! I can understand Tara a little better now that her mom is in the picture. You have a wonderful talent! Keep it up!
11/4/2007 c9 michellehp5
hey what new cd? Also I like this one better than the last one. gosh darling if that gives a hint of who this is. gtg. love ya.
hey what new cd? Also I like this one better than the last one. gosh darling if that gives a hint of who this is. gtg. love ya.
10/27/2007 c8 
25HopelessDreamer07
Hmm...so they finally committed the forbidden act, huh? Oh, dearie! I wonder what shall happen next. :O
Berta seems nice...
And I love Peter. :D
Yep...that's all for now.
25HopelessDreamer07Hmm...so they finally committed the forbidden act, huh? Oh, dearie! I wonder what shall happen next. :O
Berta seems nice...
And I love Peter. :D
Yep...that's all for now.
10/27/2007 c8 not always
Ok...so I'm like completly devoted to this story. I check almost everyday. It really is good. The whole sex thing happened at the right time. Even if they aren't married, they are engaged. The only thing I don't understand about this chapter is... " she let me stay at her house when I was sure the boogeyman was at my house (what can I say? I was four), ". Was it that she lived right next door and her parents were like "Whatever. I don't care"?
Ok...so I'm like completly devoted to this story. I check almost everyday. It really is good. The whole sex thing happened at the right time. Even if they aren't married, they are engaged. The only thing I don't understand about this chapter is... " she let me stay at her house when I was sure the boogeyman was at my house (what can I say? I was four), ". Was it that she lived right next door and her parents were like "Whatever. I don't care"?
10/27/2007 c8 3the-asylum
Oh wow... this is so good. And it was funny too! Another thing. Berta is THE best. Haha.
“Is it Peter? What did he do? By golly if that young man has hurt you, oh he is going to get a taste of Berta!” That was just too good, I laughed so much, I don't know why, lol.
I like Peter so far, so he better stay nice, or else! Haha, I'm just kidding. But I do like Peter a lot. Alas, this rambling has to come to an end.
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter,
HereIStandTheAccused
3the-asylumOh wow... this is so good. And it was funny too! Another thing. Berta is THE best. Haha.
“Is it Peter? What did he do? By golly if that young man has hurt you, oh he is going to get a taste of Berta!” That was just too good, I laughed so much, I don't know why, lol.
I like Peter so far, so he better stay nice, or else! Haha, I'm just kidding. But I do like Peter a lot. Alas, this rambling has to come to an end.
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter,
HereIStandTheAccused
10/19/2007 c7 not always
Wow...that's just...wow! That's so romantic! Why can't I get a guy like that!
Wow...that's just...wow! That's so romantic! Why can't I get a guy like that!
10/18/2007 c6 not always
Wow! I really love your story! I gives me somuch inspiration(not that I'm writig aything about your story, its not eve n here yet), just the way you write. Keep it up1 Make another chapter por favor!
Wow! I really love your story! I gives me somuch inspiration(not that I'm writig aything about your story, its not eve n here yet), just the way you write. Keep it up1 Make another chapter por favor!
10/7/2007 c4 HopelessDreamer07
Hey. No problem. ;)
Soo...Peter is just adorable! They're a cute couple. Uh oh getting into the dangerous territory though...I wonder what exactly will happen.
Thanks so much for reviewing my stories! If you get a chance sometime, you should read Sweet Addiction:JOT too. If you can.
:D
Looking forward to the next update...!
Hey. No problem. ;)
Soo...Peter is just adorable! They're a cute couple. Uh oh getting into the dangerous territory though...I wonder what exactly will happen.
Thanks so much for reviewing my stories! If you get a chance sometime, you should read Sweet Addiction:JOT too. If you can.
:D
Looking forward to the next update...!
10/6/2007 c4 meagan
I think this is one of the best stories I read! I aso don't like the idea of alcohol or sex before marriage but its still a good story! Please write more cuz Im a hopeless romantic!
I think this is one of the best stories I read! I aso don't like the idea of alcohol or sex before marriage but its still a good story! Please write more cuz Im a hopeless romantic!
10/5/2007 c3 HopelessDreamer07
I really like this!
And I'm looking forward to reading what you have planned for the next chapter!
:)
I really like this!
And I'm looking forward to reading what you have planned for the next chapter!
:)