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for Night Thoughts Feburary 19th 2007

9/27/2007 c1 sylvia's syndrome
This is really well written. I love the effect of the short lines and your use of parallelism. This poem is very strong, I think largely because of those two things. The atmosphere you created here was great too—I get a strong sense of grudging unhappiness and a touch of madness. Keep up the good work!

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